hey guys tell me how good or bad this is....wrote this for someone special.. : : i told her that i thought abt her 24/7 and she asked me ....what do i think about....and i started wondering too...and came up with this....no title... talking to you the other day... u put in my mind a question how do u figure out in my daily equation.... since I've fallen in love with u.. ive not stopped thinking about u I loose track of what I think.. but I know that I wanna know too.... I think about the look u give me.. with ur eyes so bright.. the one which tells me that u love me alright... and the look u give me thru ur eyes pursed.... with that impish twinkle... some mischief I know u surely nurse or the times when am close so close to u that it seems.. that with u my world begins... and without u it looses its sheen.. so close that our noses touch.. and our eyelashes caress the other. our breath we can feel our lips die to pucker.. and still I look into those eyes to find them looking back at me. with the life that they drown me in the ecstasy makes my heart bleed I think abt those rare moments.. when we r close to each other.. with me getting intoxicated by ur scent, ur aroma... my knees buckle and in a trance, I totter.... and when I steal those touches .. a hand here...a foot there, with my lips touching it me caressing ur skin....oh, ur porcelain skin... the adrenaline just makes my heart... like a butterfly's wings flutter... precious are those times when u & me like two neophyte lovers... just linger a look, or that knowing smile always wary of the watching others... the time we spend talking, when u pamper me without intention... treating me with utmost care giving me the security, the reassurance the kiss which was so perfect... so perfect that it made perfection curl up in shame... the kiss which made two storm clouds coalsce.. and applaud it with all their thunder.. the supple feel of ur lips on mine... makes the blood rush to face the passionate swirl of ur tonge stirs emotions in me, which i gladly embrace the feeling I get when I hold ur hand.. the warmth they just exude... the cozy hug, the wonderful cuddle. the lack of which questions my existence, my roots the times am with myself i peer into the time yet to come... see a life i want to spend in those arms.. loving u each moment of my life, loving u each moment of your life... and after that..until the end of time.. when i see those children, yet unborn, in your eyes u redefine what being a woman is.. always pouring oddles of love, without an ounce of malice.... the thought of us, makes me cry... worry not, for these are tears shed by a heart so overwhelmed by the thought of being loved back by you...being in love with u.. thank you is all they say to you..sorrow isnt why they are here, only if i could currette my mind to know what more i ponder but for now, i know this is more than my madly in love heart can gather...
Tat was straight from the heart! Yup, you can surely give this to her... Keep it up! REgards, Zooom..!!
thx peope...u knw what sucks.shes outta town and not gonna be here till tom eve..man that blows.. :badmood:
not for what i feel for this girl tried that never seem to get that content feeling.....that i finally conveyed what i wanted to say....
Well, straight from the heart and directly aiming at the point... no fancy beating around the bush...
wooo hoooo .... all dis time i stood in stress, hoping she'd like ur poem .. n she did ... phew... tell her .. thank you for liking it .. if she didn't like it then all my fake applaud wuldve been of no use (it suked man << kiddin )
She liked it peeps!!! hip hip hooray!!!! so any replies from her man....what's the deal now...bra, details, c'mon