i might not be a poet,no ,might not be one, but ,a heart ,there is,in my chest too, a heart,a volcano of feelings.... only words can it find to let out its heat, words are not enough,no,not enough at all, but......... its a human heart,tied and bound....
hey agni, let me give my honest opnion(again my opnion only) as you had asked for(in order of importance) 1:whats most imp in a poem is the feel ,that is there in loads in ur poem. 2:way u convey ur feelings.Again u are pretty good here.i almost feel that ur right here in front of me screaming 3:a poem should also have a rythm and flow.......flow is quiet good.....you have to try and add bit of a rythm in ur poem. ps:you poem sounds beautiful after the editing you have done
