hum likhna bhool gaye...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, Jan 25, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Another one... that i wrote tonight.....seems incomplete.... but for the time being...here it is.

    Hum likhna bhool gaye
    jab se huye woh paraye

    Mausam badle bichde saaye
    fizaye badli aur yeh hawaye

    Hasna bhool gaye hum
    ghumo ke baadal jab se chaye

    Tanhaiya dost ban gayi
    jab se diye hai bujhaye

    Hum likhna bhool gaye
    jab se huye woh paraye

    Ansu bhi beh jaate hai
    teri yaad jab jab humain sataye

    Jeena phir bhi seekh gaye hai
    tujhe dil main chupaye

    Hum likhna bhool gaye
    jab se huye woh paraye
     
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  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    True lines....

    Another excellent poetry..
    Keep writing...

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you... always feels good to hear your encouraging words !!
    Wont forget that u got this bug back in me ;-)
     
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    lovely.. reps for u!
     
  5. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Touchin .. Its Inspirational .. Reps if allowed .. Way to go gal .. n I know it has come straight from da heart .. also know da reason y ;) .. Great goin ..
     
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    if u keep doin some gr8 stuff like this... then.... hum bhi 'likhna bhool jayenge'...
     
  7. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you !! :)
     
  8. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Oye busy bee... where are the reps??...jhoothe !!
    I used those lines on you..(hasna bhool gaye hum..)... didnt realise that it would turn out to be a poem by the time i would hit the bed !!
    I m waiting for yours by the way....:)
     
  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    badal barasna chod de aisa ho nahi sakta
    aap likhna bhool jaye aisa ho nahi sakta

    diye ujala chod de aisa ho nahi sakta
    aap likhna bhool jaye aisa ho nahi sakta

    pyar dard dena chod de aisa ho nahi sakta
    aap likhna bhool jaye aisa ho nahi sakta

    dil dhadakna chod de aisa ho nahi sakta
    aap likhna bhool jaye aisa ho nahi sakta

    deewangi se hum oob jaye aisa ho nahi sakta
    aap likhna bhool jaye aisa ho nahi sakta

    log taane dena chod de aisa ho nahi sakta
    aap likhna bhool jaye aisa ho nahi sakta

    hum dosti nibhana chod de aisa ho nahi sakta
    aap likhna bhool jaye aisa ho nahi sakta

    hum unhe bhula de chah kar bhi aisa ho nahi sakta
    aap likhna bhool jaye aisa ho nahi sakta

    lol... this is crazy !!... i just made it up ....
     
  10. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    :think: somehow reminds me of that uncanny song....from an ajay devgan movie i guess
    kissi ke ishq meinkhud ko mita du..hmmmmm
    ho nahi sakta....lolol
     
  11. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    its good actually... n not crazy..
    it do reminds me the song.. nahi ye ho nahi saktaa...

    aap ki taarif hum wo.. khilta hua kawal likh denge..
    aapke dosti me lzbzon ka taj-mahal likh denge..
    agar aap jaise dost milenge umrabhar..
    to kuch nazm kya hum puri gazal likh denge..
     
  12. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    wah wah wah wah !! :nw:
     
  13. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    aadaf arj hai...
     
  14. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Oh this is a poor sight .. for god's sake its AADAAB ARZ HAI .. n not aada"f" ar"j" ........ Huh!
     
  15. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    gawwwdddd... bhool ho gayi notty ji.... maaf kar do plz....!!
     
  16. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    gussaaaaaaa !!

    Nottyji ... hum jaise normal insaano se galtiya ho jaati hai... samjha karo... sab aapki tarah perfect nahi hote :p:
     

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