~Hum Kahe na Kahe~ Hum khush hain ki tum khush ho Chahe tum taqdeer main meri ho na ho Intezaar tumhara hota hain hota hai hurdum Sadiyon se jaise ho raha hai in sanson pe aietbaar Mudd ke dekhoge tum ek baar Is dil main ke armaano main tu hi Is dil ki aarzoo hai tu hi Chahkar bhi hum tumhe chah na sake Koshish karke bhi tumse izhaar kar na sake Ilm na tha tum dil kahi aur chhod aaye chhot itni khae ki hum marham bhi na ban paye Yaadon ke safar main Hum khud ko bhool chale Sirf tumse naata jodke Hum zamaane se naata tod chale Kya kahe hum is dil ko apne Har pal dekhe ye tumhare hi sapne Saath dete hai sab yaha banke apna Lekin milte ho tum har pal banke ek sapna Dil de raha hai aakhri dastak.. Iska hum sune na sune Kuch keh raha ye humse Hum kahe na kahe? ----'---,--<@ Good or bad please gimme honest comments :
simply superb.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! could go on. can say nothng else. i hve gotta spread more, else.
thanks everyone and taksh-- thanks a lot dear..i really appreciate your views.. thats what i always look out for when i want honest replies... thanks again @amit- Your sure everythings fine with the poem? i thought you would do some corrections.
thanks Hardik! beautiful is one word i would never associate with my work.. still and always will be in the learning phase
