How long ??? How long will i pretend to be wat i'm not but this is wat i do... 'coz this is all i got How long will i justify to be the way i am how i feel its for real but nobody gives a damn How long will i have to dream about a dream will i have to live forever to gain my self esteem How long will i be jus' another face in the crowd will there ever be a day of which i can feel proud How long will i have to live my life on conditions is there any situation which i can call my destination How long will i be restricted to live inside this shell will i ever break through...will i ever come out of this hell???
not impressive .. maybe it would sound better if I hear it like a song. Are you writing just 'coz u have to post? Sorry I may be rude .. but I will always be honest
i'll ignore this comment coz its one of my fav.. and i wrote it long back.. maybe u dint understand feeling behind..
Ignore or take, its totally your prerogative. As far as feeling behind this poem is concerned I totally understand. It totally potraits "your frustration on something that you can do however are unable to". As I said, If I hear it as a song it may sound better. Ciao
i completely disagree wid walk alone nd think dat d poem is awesm....it kinda triggers my memories of sm events...nice poem..