Hotel California my recording my voice check it out!!

Hey guys guess what just recorded another song...this time its Hotel California(excluding end lead)..

check it out and tell me plz

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=479112

 

guys show interest its not tat bad yaar

 

the pitch of your voice is too low and the orignally sung on a very high pitch so the vocals are weak a bit u need to sing at a high pitch

as far as guitaring is concerned

guitaring is fine strumming pattern is not matching with the original

 

whats the original strumming patern can u tell me in terms of down and up

 

i think people are not interested....cummon IGTians reply

 

agree wit wat mohsin said.... need bit improvement jimmy..

 

thanx nimisha for ur reply.....will try imroving it and upload it within this week