Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by apurbajd, Jul 3, 2006.

  1. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    I know this feeling
    Known it for a long time
    Only lost for so long in the wounds of time
    When I didn’t have courage enough
    To keep count of my heartbeats
    Afraid, I may just miss one or two sometimes

    And times so cruel
    I never realised I was losing yet another charm
    Laugh at myself and wonder
    Does it make any difference at all
    When my hands were tied

    The mercy of time
    Or maybe the start of yet another game
    The wounds seem to be healing
    Though the scars remind me of the dark and near past

    But to learn living once again
    I am ready to gamble this time
    Ready to loose everything I own
    Though that’s very little
    It matters when it’s all you have ever known

    And whats driving me is the feeling
    I can feel once again
    The charm
    I can sport once again
    May be that’s what they call hope
    But I find it hard to explain.

    well! wrote it in hurry, so dont expect to be great...

    Comments n Suggestion plz....
  2. #iR@


    hmmmmmmmmm.... why did u rite it in a hurry? nice work though! :rock:
  3. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^^ I was in office when these thoughts started coming ..nd with my manager nearby I just had to do it in a hurry ... and I am too lazy to rewrite nething ....

    thanx for reading :)
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    nahi the thoughs r good ...hope ....u wrote and then u hope it be good...
  5. Hell'n Wheels

    Hell'n Wheels New Member

    I liked it! The only suggetions I have are editorial :
    may= might
    times= time's or time is
    whats= what's or what is
    Trust is the building block for love. Hell'n

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