himmat....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Apr 5, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    hi..

    posting the poetry ..HIMMAT..for your comments


    baandhane chale hai aasmaan ko apne junoon mein,
    kidhar chuup ke baithe hai jo hamein daraate the.
    sar pe kafan hai aur dil mein himmat,
    kahan gaye woh jo nazakat sikhaate the.

    sare-shaam katal hua jab hamaare armaano ka,
    jab bedili se hum tukhraaye gaye the.
    waqt ki berehami ne jab loota mujhe,
    ek pal ke saanson ke liye tadpaaye gaye the.
    kahan gaye woh jo....


    bepanaah mohabbat ki jo kasmein vaade kiye.
    nazaron mein mujko har pal bithate the,
    baatein kabr mein dafan ho gayi kyun ab,
    kabhi jo hamein deewana banaate the
    kahan gaye woh jo nazakat ....



    created the composition and posted too...
    check it out....
    link is...http://www.soundclick.com/starguru26


    rohit
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    hey not good..............I HATE SAYING TAHT.....Y Dosent any one else comment....Great Effort friend man u r very ...regular .....dedicated ...sincier...hardworking....all that...and i belive those who criticise r hollow ppl transparent.... So dont have to see them standing....even me...when i comment
     
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    every stanza is different thought itself..
    need continuous link...

    i agree wit u madhuresh..
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    u kinda agree with everything i say........:think:
     

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