heres something that i really feel that is true and yet most of us never could have thought about... i mean in the sense that how somethign could help u and HARM u at the sametime.... anyway... i would just like to clarify that the first 3 verses are not by me... i heard these lines somewhere and thought i should turn it into a poem! looking fwd to ur comments.. so.... here goes........ hidden tasks Money… That could get u all the luxuries It could even sell u Water… That could quench ur thirst It could even drown u Fire… That could provide u with warmth It could even burn u Love… That could even bring smiles It could also betray u Fate… That could keep u trying It could even make u lose hope Dreams… That could tell u the future They could also leave u petrified Words… That could help u express They could also fail u hope u liked it... looking fwd to ur posts
its a good concept...! few from me.. relationships.. can make u fly in the sky of hapiness can keep u tied by its golden chains life can make u learn many thngs can drain ur power to learn education can make u smart n sensible can make u oversmart n stonehearted dreams can make u happy wit a hope can turn into nightmares poetry can bring out some unknown emotions deep inside you can supress all ur feeling under a plastic smile of creativity nimisha can shut up now and stop doing such poetries can go on.. n irritate you wit her words always..
@ har1s... thanks!! @ nimisha.... thanks a lot and nice stuff...... last verse was pretty well thought! : (kidding )
@ garima.... comments r alwayss welcomed! thanks for the honest comments @ rizaaj....... thanks man! its just cause of u guys that i post these poems to be honest!
i dont know about the poetic quality of this poem ... but reps to you for bringing up such a an idea .... i enjoyed it ..
