Hidden Desire

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by tumhare_divya, Jul 2, 2005.

  1. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    I am new to this site...and i release my emotional stresses through dance, music, and poetry :dance: ....this poem i wrote about my best guy friend who i am in love with :hbr: ...and the conflict of whether or not to tell him... :aggre: ANYHOW...I NEED SOMEONES HELP PUTTING A MELODY TO MY POEM. :help: I will be expecting comments from you guys. :nw: This song you will be helping me make will mean the world to me. :beer:


    I deeply want and love you...and i'm scared to tell you so
    I hope and dream we both share this thought
    How could i ever know?
    I am friends with you that's why i fear
    and suffer from heart ache..........
    that telling you of my love for you
    could make our friendship break...........
    Each day we spend as just plain friends
    all the while u have no clue..........
    How much i have the deepest desire
    to pour my love on you.......
    I stare and laugh at the cute stuff you do
    and it makes my heart go wild........
    i thought you don't notice yet i was wrong ...........
    you felt my stare and smiled
    i act wierd with you to hear you laugh that i very much enjoyed'
    because a day for me, without seeing your smile, creates in my life...a void
    I really love u so much........
    and no, it is not lust....
    I am keeping it locked up inside
    so as not to lose ur trust.......
    Your trust, that all these moments we've been together,
    that it was just as friends.........
    WHEN IN TRUTH I HAVE, AND FOREVER WILL WISH,
    TO SIMPLY LOVE YOU TO THE END...........
     
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  2. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    i like your poem very much. it's very emotional. but, i can't put a melody to it cuz i'm not good it. but the lyrics are really good.
     
  3. devilguitar

    devilguitar New Member

    nice work !!!!
    sorry ....can't help.... i ain't good at poems
     
  4. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    in what way do you xpect us to put a melody to that?! i cant get what you meant!are you searching for some tune or chords or something!?!
     
  5. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    I just need a tune for that poem to make it a song..... preferably not chords...........If you can help me w/ ur guitar tabs, i would be grateful......
     

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