hi. check out my (crap) dilharey download now dude.. https://rapidshare.de/files/2019879/dilharey.mp3.html hehe.. in the alaap i tried to turn my face away frm the mic (to lower the loudness) and screwed it up .. guys plz give ur feedback
K,.. i heard it completely,.... Hmm,.. dude,,.... am a newbie too,..11 mnths of guitarin,.. n i can say one thing,.. u play guitar a hell lot better than me man!!! Also,... ur vocals have improved from the 1st post that u had posted,... so all in all,..gud man, u r climbing the ladder .
Pretty guitaring! The start of that song is so gorgeous. The recording is a shame - cos it makes everything sound very boomy at the start. I know singing and playing at the same time is hard - but you seemed a little out of time at the start...maybe its the strumming pattern that didn't fit? Nice voice - but you're holding back. Like you aren't opening your mouth properly. Nice enough tone - but let go a little! Otherwise the guitar overpowers you. It gets better as you go on (the O hos are good!) - I presume it's cos your voice has had the chance to warm up It's a very decent attempt - so well done Just a few timing issues and vocals need a little practice!
thx fatima ! 'll keep those things in mind when i record some more stuff.. u're right.. i realized i was holding back my voice a little. thx again ~!
i just made an id on soundclick and uploadede this song there. herez the link https://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/jstfzn_music.htm plz do chk out guys..