Hey! are You There?

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by EP/*rocks*/, Jun 30, 2008.

  1. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    this is the song which i written when i was ditched by a girl to whom i loved with full passion and compassion but she doesn`t care about them any more


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    starting stanza:
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    hey! are you there ?

    i can hear your heart beating !

    oh it is so clear!

    you can`t hide yourself

    if i am there

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    verse:
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    running to the dreams is so fanatic

    and loosing them is so tragedic

    earlier you was thinking just of me

    now you don`t want me to come closer to you

    i am shattered through your behaviour


    i am unable to think now what to do "

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    "ANY FURTHER IMPROVEMENT WILL BE HEARTLY APPRECIATED"
     
  2. SqueakM9

    SqueakM9 mumble

    dude this in the kind of song that only you can write because only you have the feelings for that girl...
    all of us have been put through the wringer...
    try me...
    engaged twice yet still single and a daddy at that...
    try going through old photos or hanging out at old haunts...
    it'll come to ya...
    trust me...

    but so far its not so bad
     
  3. CARLOS SANTANA

    CARLOS SANTANA New Member

    was this lyrics seriously written as a broken heart full of anger towards their women?
    man!get a life !
    why 2 depend on woman, giving up everything 2 them (even if they dont need)and end up smashing our life and career?or a day at least.
    but it does makes us poetic tho......
     
  4. SqueakM9

    SqueakM9 mumble

    because life is boring with out the chaos of a female in it
     
  5. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    thanks



    actually what happen is that

    i am the weakest boy in my class


    so , it was harder to me ` to find anyone for me

    when i got her it really seems that i was really happy with that

    it was not only the infatuation!
     
  6. greenhead

    greenhead New Member

    missiiiiiiiiiiiing something dere is no soul.....sorry...
     
  7. EP/*rocks*/

    EP/*rocks*/ New Member

    thanks!1!!!


    hey! thanks
     

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