hey a song i wrote and its tab

hey guys let me know what u think..........
EXILE TO THE MOON
Dm
YOU FAKED YOUR SMILE,
BUT I WENT AHEAD,
C
JUST AN ANOTHER MILE,
A
IN TO THE DEEP EXILE TO THE MOON.

Dm
YOUR EYES BETRAYED ALL THE LIES YOU TOLD,
C
YOUR FACE POTRAYED ALL THE TALES UNTOLD,
A
DONT YOU KNOW

Dm
I AM OFF TO LAND,
C
WHERE THE SUN DONT SHINE,
A
AND THE NIGHTS ARE LONG
Dm
FOR IT NEVER RAINS,
C
FOR THE PARCHED HEART ,
A
IN THE MOON

 

Nice lyrics, but the song and chords. Well, can you post a recording of some sort of you playing it? So we can figure out the rhythm?

 

nice one deepak...

 

thank u...............

 

nice one deepak, but can we hear it, as DIST said can u please record and let us hear.....

anyways nice lyrics

 

sure riyaz.........i shall try as soon as possible.............thank you....

 

whos riyaz my name was rizaaj :

 

oh ...................sorry pal.......................

 

wanna hear it

 

very good...
hope to hear some more...

 

@amit thank u pal

 

nice one keep it up

 

@mani thank u buddy

 

Whenever I see a thread by U, my hand automatically clicks the mouse. Very Nice....

 

@sanjay thank u pal........thats one of the best compliment i have ever got ..man i am blushing..............

 

Oh really! Then I'm happy.... Well, no need to blush there, U really deserve that....