Here a new Song(Lyrics) By Me

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Priyank_Jal_fan, Jan 25, 2006.

  1. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    LOST OF FAITH--- Priyank_jal_fan

    Lost of Faith
    Lost all hope

    Lost everything
    coz i've been ****ed

    chorus: BY THE SON OF GOD

    Lost of Faith
    Lost all hope

    Lost everything

    VERSE 1:
    men with swords
    men with kiss
    reap the fields
    and plant orchids

    Lost of Faith
    Lost all hope

    Lost everything

    coz i've been ****ed

    chorus: BY THE SON OF GOD

    VERSE 2:
    there is no armour
    against mighty fate
    death lays his icy hands
    even on kings

    bring down thier heads
    on the cold tombs
    whom they layed down
    al call of their faith

    COZ IVE LOST ALL FAITH
    LOST ALL HOPE
    LOST EVERYTHING ......

    _____________________


    tell me how it is??
     
    ElysiaN and the_wizard like this.
  2. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    why are u so much into hate and stuff.
    write some good happy poems.
    U seem a lot inspired by nu-metal.

    Anyway, it was decent, compose it and post in the IGT soundtrack forum if u want reps.

    PS--who is this "Son of god"
     
  3. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    its my style.....
    i love hate............
    did you read the other one i posted....
    check that out too....


    please rep me coz i cannot compose it as i dont have a band!!!
    and i hate using fruity loop...
    well i could submit the chord for this song .....

    please reps!!!!
     
  4. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    Chked the othr one too....more hate stuff
    honestly I cannot digest all this HATE

    ok...reps for u
    But sit down one ady with ur guitar and try composing it

    btw...ur a jal fan and still all this hate stuff?
     
  5. ElysiaN

    ElysiaN d@Rk\/\/@|\|deReR

    :beer: may add more hatred wid a good progression.... reps for u.... :rock:
     
  6. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    i like jal coz they make me think that world is not as bad as i think....
    they help be reduces my hatred otherwise i should have burnt of by all those hates....


    thanks for the rep al you guys
    next hate song coming up soon
     
  7. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    U still havnt told who is "Son of god"
     
  8. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    please rate my post if u like it
     
  9. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    com on i dont know!!!!!
    i was thinkin of hercules when i wrote this
     
  10. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    so u are herclues?? or ur future lead singer in case u start a band...

    whatever, arey yaar plz remove that "for all Filthy souls" from the title of the thread. people will go away without reading
     
  11. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    no i m nt hercules but he is the SON OF GOD .......

    now is that fine....
    i removed that " All filthy souls"
    i m a voalist as well as guitarist(not a good one though,, still learning)
    i would one day be the BAD version of Goher(jal) compose like him and sing like him
    but sing about hate.....
     
  12. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    Good...u can now request cryptic_angel or any other mod to remove the same "for all filthy....." from your Thread's name....its not a good thing to call everyone "filthy people"

    All he best...learn well

    It wont be good if Goher starts singing about bad stuff (hate and all) I eman his voice wont suit the style whch u want to adopt....

    why dont u practice growling...death metal style vocals are good for this stuff
     
  13. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    actually i HATE DEATH METAL music coz i dont understand what those utter from there filthy mouth.....
    i hate Bollywood music except FEW....
    I hate English POP SONG
    I love nu metal, heavy and altern Rock....


    and for my singing i dont think my voice would suit those growling or shouting ....
    yup ..... i m learning how to sing alaap....
     
  14. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God


    oh thats awesome...yeah agreed that death metal vocals suck bigtime...those jerks dont even know what they are singing about and no one can understand them and their mouth shud be fitted in the rear so tht they shit from it and it becomes more filthy

    nu metal rules....can u sing like Corey Taylor (the guy from Slipknot)....he is quite cool at times
     
  15. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    Can u tell me how to Change the sub-title Below my UASER ID (Beginner)
     
  16. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

  17. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    No but i like slipknot, Korn, Linkin, SOD, GnR, 36 CRAZYFIST, TWELVE STONES, alterbridge, lost prophets, CREEDfOO FIGHTERS, iron maiden, nickleback, simple plan(punk) ...... and many.........

    dont you think Jal can be called as ASIAN CREED...
    THEY ARE SIMILAR IN MANY ASPECTS.... except the language ofcourse
     
  18. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    No I Hate That Title...
    Let Me See.......
     
  19. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God


    good choice...have u heard the new album by Korn?? chk it out its amazing

    Yeah, they are very similar to creed except the vocalist and the language
     
  20. Priyank_Jal_fan

    Priyank_Jal_fan ..:[Snip]:..

    whats the album title???
     

Share This Page