hell gate completed

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by hate_breeder, Feb 15, 2006.

  1. hate_breeder

    hate_breeder worms r shcarryyy :'(

    ok i have completed my poem hell gate...
    here it is
    Hell Gate
    One night in Dark forest
    I stumbled upon Ancient passage....
    It lead to hell's gate
    where souls meet true carnage..

    from the dark ages, the gate hails
    created by satanism and hate...
    where ancient evil awaits and
    every sinner's soul finds his fate...

    in the mists of abaddon
    the Devil's paradise of pain..
    fallen angels await their judgement
    where lost souls are slain...

    cursed by the hands of Doom
    a place where souls rust...
    hear the choirs of damnation
    for flesh where demons lust...

    In its heart the Evil dwells
    unholy powers in reign....
    souls are damnated and tortured
    and reincarnated again..

    As I approached the Hell gate,
    It Opened for me....
    A world of pleasure in pain
    damned my soul with fury....
    Varshita likes this.
  2. mr singh

    mr singh New Member

    interesting, i feel like reading more :)
  3. nimitr

    nimitr New Member

    hey hate_breeder....that was really nice .. seems interesting .. is this all or there is still more to come on this .. wud be interesting to read more on that ...
  4. hate_breeder

    hate_breeder worms r shcarryyy :'(

    may be i am thinking of adding more but it would be too long then, i want my poems to be short
  5. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Nice imagery mate :beer:

    My kind ov stuff

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