i have NO clue why i rote this... i have NO clue how i came up with the title... rote the poem in a few minutes actually i just wanted to rite something and didnt have ANY idea about wat to rite so this is wat i came up wid.... -> He hold my hand and let me show you the world from my point of view walk with me through the lane of my life and my foot steps will guide you through dont be afraid i wont let you do the mistakes i did dont worry i'll be here with you cause i am giving you my life just be by my side give me a chance and try trusting me and i swear i wont let you down! thx for reading... and like always comments welcomed
hmmm this seems like a begining to a good poem .... u can try completing it ... sounds good though ... as usual different stuff from u ... i liked it .... gandi bacchi is reloaded
Hmmm...well I especially liked stanza 1...2 and 3 are pretty good too..It's sweet and simple..nothing wrong with it though the title feels to be remotely related (when I have nothing to complain about I start criticizing titles).. Well it's really a good write and since you mentioned you wrote it at that moment,it's really credible...portrays that maternal instinct in women too..so,again,it's sweet and simple..liked it.
@ nimitr... thx a LOT! hearing from u after a VERY long time though! good to have u back @ manas... well hmmmmmmmmmm.... so u cudnt find anything to criticise on... rightttttttt! lol ok just kidding... : even i thought that the title wasnt appropriate but my other option was HIM instead of HE and by the time i came up wid HIM... i was wayy too lazy to change it and oh yea i know HIM is equally as bad as HE! lol thx anyway! always looking fwd to ur comments
I prefer not_neo..lol..sounds cooler:dance: Okk on topic..why did you want that title??I mean if you had any particular reason then plz share...well as long as you look at my comments you can look forward to them too
@ i'm_not_neo... <-- its hard to write this u know! well the TITLE i chose HIM/HE was cause... the whole poem is regarding "THE SOMEONE" i mean blahhhhh u get the point.... so ummm if u see i HAVENT used the words him/he anywhere in the poem so i thought this cud be a kool title! ok did i make any sense? : lol
lol..lemme see this is coming from some1 who has her name #iR@??lol...okk I'm getting way off topic: No..well it did make sense...actually,it's an interesting idea...yeah,though in that case Him would be better..but He is good too
@ #iR@ ... hey i dont visit IGT regularly ... but whenever i notice anything worth putting a comment .. i do so ... good to know tht u remember my previous posts ....
