Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by ~Bish, Jul 24, 2007.

  1. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist


    Thot will quit poetry.. but something in my ass brings me here again n again.. lost in this crowd.. again stands this soul...

    You don't deserve me
    something which i wana say
    You don't care for me
    Just leave me n go ur way

    Love is not a joke
    which everyone can share
    Feelings are just a pain
    which need guts to dare

    One day you will remember
    when i will not b there
    one stupid liked me like hell
    n stupids like him are really rare...

    I tried my best to hate u
    but this ****ing heart ditched
    I will hate love my whole life
    with something broken that can't b fixed..

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  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Thought that you'll quite writing poetry? Why? If you like to do it, then why would u try n force yourself not to?

    Just curious.
  3. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    nice presentation of your innermost upheavel of emotions.....

    another feather in your cap................

    keep writing

  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    wahts taht thingy....lol.....u knw some thing opposite to my ass take me to many good places....cha cha

    ur poem was good ....mugambo kush huaa....but i bet u cant quit...!
  5. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    haha..nice reason to resume poetry..anyways its a nice poem..I can see this is a different point of view at break ups...nice one..the ending though used many times before was pretty effective..
  6. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    nice work....emotions penned in words nicely.....one reading it sways with the feelings..
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    so now u getting over haan!!

    hehe.. nice way to say it..
    great poem there..
  8. #iR@


    hmmmm.... got no comments for this one... i mean yea good poem blah blah/etc etc... BUT sad....
  9. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    thanx for liking my poems..

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