~Hark!! The Knell Rings... Again~

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Jan 23, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    ~Hark!! the knell rings... again~

    Amidst a sea the devil lives
    He drowns broken hearts in his cup of fiery mist
    The hearts burn.
    The hearts squeal.
    But the devils just a sadist beast.
    He rakes a heart with a heated spear
    And writes on a stone till it smears
    He writes
    “Known to one and known to all
    Here lies a girl who was late in her call
    Let this be a lesson to one and all
    Knells ring sooner for the broken hearts of all”


    looking forward to comments....
    good or bad..jus be honest :eek::
    zoomingrocket likes this.
  2. taxyse

    taxyse t3h.

    hey nice!!!..i didnt knw ur could write....and write well tooo...
    great work!!!
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    hey thanks dude:eek::
    i have posted some of my nonsensical stuff on IGT..

    Pssst-how do u think i'v so many posts..:p:
  4. taxyse

    taxyse t3h.

    even i have so many posts...but i hardly post nowadyas....
  5. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Its beautiful dear...

    Dont know what made you write that.. but its really nice...

  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    :nw: amazing.. :nw:
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    cudnt believe that cute child in the avtaar cud write words such as .. heart burns..squeal.. saddist beast..
    but poem is gr8...!
  8. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    You have demonstrated poetic excellence sweetheart, but :sigh: on one hand i try not to refrain you from writing such good poems on another, the images that your poem stir up are quite disturbing......... In any case i love ye, so keep on doing whatever you like best darling :)
  9. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    @Zoom- Mind rambles heart wanders
    jus thought of writing somethin close to non-fictitious;)

    @Cryptic Angel-- thanks dear:) btw i'd set that word aside to term your poems

    @nimisha -thanks gal, many things are deceptive.. that lil kid is the happiest..no worries watsoever:)

    @disturbed- Am sorry..but hope u understand...
  10. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    this made me sad, and mad :cry1:
    painted a painful sight in front of my eyes.......
    too much pain.....
  11. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    Nice.....U can be the official songwriter for Demonic Ressurection.

    Just kidding....but I cant deny that Im in love with u after reading this..:eek::

  12. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    thanks doc
    its good to have mixed feelings..
    happens to me every other time -- :) :cry2:
    hope i could answer all the questions

    Hey thanks dear
    **sigh** never thought about it that way........
    but how could This make u fall in Love? :shock:
  13. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    a sad/dark poem is all needed to make me fall in love :'(

  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    i thought u were sick of dark stuff :think:... but i guess bubbly's an exception eh?? ;)
  15. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    tried to run away from it...but eventually I cant get away from the darkness

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