~Hark!! the knell rings... again~ Amidst a sea the devil lives He drowns broken hearts in his cup of fiery mist The hearts burn. The hearts squeal. But the devils just a sadist beast. He rakes a heart with a heated spear And writes on a stone till it smears He writes “Known to one and known to all Here lies a girl who was late in her call Let this be a lesson to one and all Knells ring sooner for the broken hearts of all” --,-'---<@ looking forward to comments.... good or bad..jus be honest :
hey thanks dude: i have posted some of my nonsensical stuff on IGT.. Pssst-how do u think i'v so many posts..:
cudnt believe that cute child in the avtaar cud write words such as .. heart burns..squeal.. saddist beast.. but poem is gr8...!
You have demonstrated poetic excellence sweetheart, but :sigh: on one hand i try not to refrain you from writing such good poems on another, the images that your poem stir up are quite disturbing......... In any case i love ye, so keep on doing whatever you like best darling
@Zoom- Mind rambles heart wanders jus thought of writing somethin close to non-fictitious @Cryptic Angel-- thanks dear btw i'd set that word aside to term your poems @nimisha -thanks gal, many things are deceptive.. that lil kid is the happiest..no worries watsoever @disturbed- Am sorry..but hope u understand...
this made me sad, and mad :cry1: painted a painful sight in front of my eyes....... too much pain..... y??
Nice.....U can be the official songwriter for Demonic Ressurection. Just kidding....but I cant deny that Im in love with u after reading this..: *sigh*
thanks doc its good to have mixed feelings.. happens to me every other time -- :cry2: hope i could answer all the questions Hey thanks dear **sigh** never thought about it that way........ but how could This make u fall in Love? :shock: