Harbinger's Lament

A sudden burst of creativity (if you can call it that)... didn't really edit or think much while writing... not particularly good... Its supposed to be a speed metal song.

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Harbinger's Lament

(verse 1)
Shepherd of the vale
Son of the king of the lost
He Shall lead the men to hope.
From dust he shall rise again
And To dust he shall ride in pain
(The Bringer of Death...)

(verse 2)
And in the guise of a sleeping lamb
A wolf will betray his own clan
I've seen it in sands

(bridge)
Bells ring and children shout
Death comes and thunder clouds

(chorus)
Messiah they say I am
But am I a God... I don't know
And in the face of certain death
Of what use is knowing the truth
Is this a clue?

(verse 3)
As he weaves the thread of fate
They shall all be saved and enslaved
Bringer of day and yet lover of night
Martyrdom he changed into bliss
Oh what great price must he pay
(To see the world safe)

(verse 4)
Dawn is and dawn shall bring
A thorn in the rose of his plans
I've seen it in sands

(bridge)
Bells ring and children shout
Death comes and thunder clouds

(chorus)
Messiah they say I am
But am I a God... I don't know
And in the face of certain death
Of what use is knowing the truth
Is this a clue?

Bells ring and children shout
Is this the end?
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That was awsome. Great concept. Thumbs up!!

 

wow...brilliant...:rock:

 

Fantastic Champ!. Keep it up

 

That was good, essi.

 

Funny how everyones noticing this now. Considering it was posted on the 2nd of december last year.

 

hehe,well...when you told me about this poem I just had to reply to it

 

Nice 1 dude, better than most of the other crappy stuffs out here with concept of love

 

Juz wanted to know, Is this how Aragorn feels as he fights the war? Whatever it be, you've got it perfect!

 

no this one is not related to tolkien... it began with the idea of Rand Al'Thor from Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time but I diverged mid way...

 

dude essi u rock. welcome back