k m first poems [on igt] lemme know - is it bad? or verse??? hehe Haikus ~ I knew what I had to do. What I did not know Was how to do it. ~ I tried to write but no words came Did my mind run dry Or just the ink? ~
haikus > is this ur name or even this is part of poem ?? don't u know its a RULE HERE THAT ANY NEW POET HAS TO GO TO MY TUTORIALS ON POETRY (search it ) " so read my tutorial and u will learn how to write "
nice efforts.. n as ink is dried... take another pen..n start writting again.. this time...lengthy one..
Dammit, I really should have a look at different forms of poetry and the rules... I just commented without knowing it properly :
well, i guess haikus are short and simple.. and yeah, it does go like 5/7/5... i have tried writing haikus and tankas.....just for school.. good job yaar
Actually the trock is to put in something real in those 3 little lines...sometimes a bit of depth or truth On a stormy night The moon still shines but wistful Candles look brighter and sometimes with a touch of humour Confucious once said If you not have girl you want Want girl that you have
thnx 2 all of ya....... sorry cant write longer haikus [japnese poems] cos by defnition its gotta b only 17 syllables long suposedly 17 sylabls r "perfectly balanced" or sumthin - i dunno??!! k ne wayz here coms th next..... ~ Friends abound The wine flows endless Why does the laughter sound hollow? ~ Harsh words hurt the ears. But the weight of silence Is too much to carry. ~ Trees make way for bright lights. Sweat overpowers the shade. Death draws a little closer. ~ Gloomy night shattered by a phone call. Her voice Turned winter into spring. ~ Heartbroken pleas Fell on deaf ears Even walls make better listeners. ~ bad or verse?? lemme know :beer:
actually i wasnt aware of this - sheesh - but..... aparently this rule can be broken 4 english haikus https://www.bikereader.com/contributors/etc/haiku/BRhaiku5.html
