Guzre Pal - My new Hindi song

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by geniusoid, Nov 19, 2006.

  1. geniusoid

    geniusoid Acoustic Alchemist

    Its a song originally by Audio Detour....here'z my version...

    GUZRE PAL
    Waqt ki silwaton mein
    Guzre pal bikhre hain
    Jaane kyon woh lamhe phir
    Aaj dil mein ubhre hain

    Un lamhon mein saji
    Chaar pal dosti ke
    Kya woh din the, kya woh raatein
    Mausiki ke, bandagi ke

    Yun to socha na tha pal woh paani the
    Bandh mutti se ik din beh jaayenge
    Dil se ho kar aaj aakon se
    Banke moti yun umad aayenge
    par dil ko yeh khabar hai ki
    woh pal hai zindagi ke liye

    Alwida keh na paaun
    Phir lamhon ko jee na paaun
    Alwida keh na paaun
    Phir lamhon ko jee na paaun

    Bas yaadein hain un baaton ki, un raaton ki
    Bas yaadein hain...mere yaaron ki

    SONG LINK: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=565809

    Note: My mic has a lotta issue while recording - I apologise for the high noise levels in the vox...

    Will appreciate sincere feedback on the effort :)

    -sOid
     
  2. mubeen_rocks

    mubeen_rocks New Member

    n ok atemo 4m ma side,,,guitaring eas kool ..vokalz involv a bit of nsal tone they were not goin out of sur bt lacked energee
     
  3. geniusoid

    geniusoid Acoustic Alchemist

    thanks....thought it was supposed to be a sad and more like a song picturised with a guy thinkin abt his past yrs sitting over a cup of cutting chai at a lonely place! Thts why the lack of energee i guess....nasal tone is coz i have a damn bad cold for 3 days now! :wink: Sneezin the hell outta everyone at home here!
     
  4. mubeen_rocks

    mubeen_rocks New Member

    see if da song is sad dat doesnt mean dere shud b no energee,,ba energee i dun mean 2 sing like a rik star..i mean jab koi gaye to khud us ki awaz boley k han wo banda khudee say satisfied hai wat he is singing internlly aap yey feel kero aur ye usee waqt hoga wen u concentrate hard
     

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