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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by itwasnoteasy, Feb 9, 2006.

  1. itwasnoteasy

    itwasnoteasy E chord humka dede Thakur

    kuch shabdon ka gum ho jana he unki kismat hai
    kisi kone me chup jana he unki fitrat hai
    sakshat ho jaayein to tuchch hai
    andheron me kho jaayein to anmol hain
     
  2. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    hi

    it was surely not easy....LOL

    hey dude try not blending urdu and pure hindi word together...actually breaks the flow of the "ghazal"...nice statement though.
     
  3. sweetie

    sweetie New Member


    Bohot khub..

    nahi khona chahte gum shabdon mein
    nahi hai firat kisi kone mei chup jaane ki
    Aayen hain aa kele jaayenge bhi akele
    Chaand tanhayion se main ne muhabbat jo karli hai
     
  4. itwasnoteasy

    itwasnoteasy E chord humka dede Thakur

    hum to apne khayalon ko samet rahe the
    aur aapne use charcha kar diya
    hum to use dil me dafan kar rahe the
    aur aapne phir zinda kar diya...
     

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