yelling on change of my attitude every thing...small or noticeable what was precious for our togtherness... suddenly looked as worthless. tears are like melodramatic, the smiles are now sarcastic the words are like arrows. the personality suddenly overlapped by criticism the closeness were over bearing.. the words spoken are less relevant non entity... we are in love..... getting matured and reponsible about our affection early colour of our emotions were getting faded.. we started knowing each other more concretely.. love has taken the place of being granted... between each other.. rohit astroguru26
words are misplaced.................i cud have done more better with the theme of getting the feeling of grantedness ... rohit
Got lost and confused somewhere in between... then had to start reading again. Still couldnt gather much. Though i really liked these lines
Rohit, its gud to read somthing as raw as this. try geting your 4th line "suddenly looked as worthless" with first para.then it makes more sense...i dunno what was ur idea though. "yelling on change of my attitude every thing...small or noticeable what was precious for our togtherness... suddenly looked as worthless." What do u say?