Goodbye

@abhi

darkness of engineering?? err... u handle that 1..... :

 

i used to b4

but now a bit busy so cant get inspiration n time

perhaps will start writing again when i graduate ( 5more years left)

 

@abhi - yeah , i do research n anlysis but not devolopment!: ...its all for fun! you know it!

 

*reads the poem*
*thinks wat to write*
*searching for words*
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.*got just one word*
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.WOW...................

 

Hey cryptic .. U'll agree wid me dat it's not actually a poem or a poetry but rather a prose .. anyway it's hitchy .. but nice

PS- I feel u have a lot more potential than this one

 

@garima

thnx babe


@notty_lad

nope.. i disagree.... what exactly qualifies as a poem accroding to u?
anyways, thnx

 

Prose is juz expressive writing .. it's not rhythmic .. whereas poetry is literature in rhythmic arrangement of syllables .. anyway .. forget this technical stuff n juz write wat our heart says .. dat is wat is more important.. good job keep it up

 

there was a subtle rhyme scheme there... i guess it was too subtle for u to notice :think:

 

well it was not too subtle for me to notice .. but it was too subtle to be called a poetry .. anyway .. as i told u it doesn't matter babes ..

 

others noticed it. it doesnt have to rhyme like a nursery rhyme ya know...

 

well .. ur arguing for nothing .. juz chuck it now will u .. Uff .. juz bcoz i called it a prose doesn't mean it's bad .. infact so many people write proses .. anyway let's end da argument.. will ya ?

 

it's not abt it being bad or good. (i myslef write prose but this is not one of em. check the previous replies, u'll know what i mean when i disagree with u.)

it's abt you being wrong and refusing to accept it..

(i'm in a bad mood today :annoyed: )

good night!

 

ok .. if it makes u feel better .. i accept i'm wrong .. nice one(i'm sincerely telling this)

 

you seem to b more sensible than your aged girls do. I am sure u wont be comfortable enuf with your aged people but with those who are elder to you.(just a guess) you have got depth in ur words. keep it up :beer: i am joining vini's team of your pankhas. i'll try experimenting with your words wait n' watch ... : you are EXCELLENT.

 

@notty

m in a better mood today : thnx


@itwasnoteasy

i do gel better with ppl a bit older than i am...
another pankha!! :annoyed:
maybe u all should start a pankha club :
thnx a lot
what sorta experiment??? :think:

 

Dats da way to go u moody little gal(cryptic) .. All is well dat ends well .. n finally .. nice "POEM"

 

boy!
dunno what gives u the inspiration to repeatedly pen down superb stuff like the above!

and there must be a ton of words in that vocab stash of urs to be able to put down ur thoughts so lucidly on paper[or the computer screen]

 

there is so obvious a rhyme scheme to this poem

 

thnx...

 

@notty

ha!! :