Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Oct 28, 2005.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    My doors are closed
    Don't force me
    You broke me to pieces
    And now you ask me
    "What's wrong?"
    Can't you see
    I'm not yours
    You can't save me

    Before you figure this out
    I'll be gone
    To this black night
    There is no dawn
    Before, I was in love
    Now, I'm torn
    I was never like you
    I'm just not strong

    You may forget
    What we were
    My face to you
    May soon be a blur
    No matter how much dust
    My picture shall gather
    Atleast, no more,
    Will I get weathered
  2. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    one word.................awesome....:nw:
  3. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Hahaa....another quality product from the poem wrote all this in less than 70 minutes?
  4. #iR@


    GREAT! u rite REALLLYYYYYY well!!!!!!!! :nw: :rock:
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    in less than 17 mins actually... thnx

    @the_wizard, hira

  6. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    woa..nice man..nice...............
  7. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    B-e-a-uitful inspire me cryptic....great work...!!:)
  8. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Meh......same here.. keep them comming...
  9. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    now i got it ...
    the reason for u acting so pissed off in the evening ...
    u ultimately penned it down ...

  10. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!



    @hardik, shsnawada

    i inspire u??!! :shock:

    wow.. thnx


    yeah.. so now u know u can expect a poem everytime i act weird.
  11. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Whats so shocking about that?? And is this poem because you acted a bit "wierd" yesterday?? :alien1:
    Revolts kick ass...:beer:
  12. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    haha.. by 'weird', i didnt mean 'the revolt'... i was kinda acting weird last evening, that's what jekyll was talkin abt...
  13. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    nice one man....
  14. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    lOvely.. how do u write?? Taking some drugs or what??:think:

  15. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    did u read my poem all over again n felt it's nice AGAIN? lol.. thnx again :p:


    haha.. thnx, no drugs :p:
  16. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    hoohhoo.. Your avatar has hands cut off.. But dont ever cut them off in real life.. Or you would never be able to write beautiful poems..:beer:

  17. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^^ur such a kid.. lol

    but thanx :)
  18. faiqrock

    faiqrock XaiQ

    nice man very nice CHAH gaya
    keep it up
  19. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    thnx.. poem chha gaya ya main chha gayi??

    or both ;)
  20. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    :annoyed:.. don't call me a kid..!! Grrrrrrrrr.. I will turn 17 very so0n!!;)


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