Goodbye

My doors are closed
Don't force me
You broke me to pieces
And now you ask me
"What's wrong?"
Can't you see
I'm not yours
You can't save me

Before you figure this out
I'll be gone
To this black night
There is no dawn
Before, I was in love
Now, I'm torn
I was never like you
I'm just not strong

You may forget
What we were
My face to you
May soon be a blur
No matter how much dust
My picture shall gather
Atleast, no more,
Will I get weathered

 

one word.................awesome....:nw:

 

Hahaa....another quality product from the poem factory....you wrote all this in less than 70 minutes?

 

GREAT! u rite REALLLYYYYYY well!!!!!!!! :nw: :rock:

 

@shsnawada

in less than 17 mins actually... thnx

@the_wizard, hira

thnx..

 

woa..nice man..nice...............

 

B-e-a-uitful poem......you inspire me cryptic....great work...!!

 

Meh......same here.. keep them comming...

 

now i got it ...
the reason for u acting so pissed off in the evening ...
u ultimately penned it down ...

good

 

@abhimanjrekar

thnx..



@hardik, shsnawada

i inspire u??!! :shock:

wow.. thnx


@jekyll

yeah.. so now u know u can expect a poem everytime i act weird.

 

Whats so shocking about that?? And is this poem because you acted a bit "wierd" yesterday?? :alien1:
Revolts kick ass...:beer:

 

haha.. by 'weird', i didnt mean 'the revolt'... i was kinda acting weird last evening, that's what jekyll was talkin abt...

 

nice one man....

 

lOvely.. how do u write?? Taking some drugs or what??:think:

nIK!!

 

@abhimanjrekar

did u read my poem all over again n felt it's nice AGAIN? lol.. thnx again :


@nik

haha.. thnx, no drugs :

 

hoohhoo.. Your avatar has hands cut off.. But dont ever cut them off in real life.. Or you would never be able to write beautiful poems..:beer:

nIK!!

 

^^^ur such a kid.. lol

but thanx

 

nice man very nice CHAH gaya
keep it up

 

@faiq

thnx.. poem chha gaya ya main chha gayi??

or both

 

:annoyed:.. don't call me a kid..!! Grrrrrrrrr.. I will turn 17 very so0n!!

nIK!!