Gone by School Days...

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  1. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR


    "Looking through the rough past...
    The days which passed thick and fast....

    The early morning wake ups...
    The different dress ups...

    The ever-long wait for the bus to arrive...
    The fight for the window-seat...

    The long assembly sessions...
    The gruelling 45 minutes of torture....

    The ever-lasting desire for free period...
    The nail-biting 3-tier exams...

    The big laughs, giggles & pranks...
    The every minute we enjoyed....

    Precious Moments... Precious Memories..."


    REgards,
    Zooom...!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Aug 7, 2005
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  2. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    good work there zooom!i too miss skool very much!
     
    rocking_devil, Aug 8, 2005
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  3. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    wow...nice one zoom....skool....best period of my life....
     
    $cReWdR!veR, Aug 8, 2005
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  4. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    :sniff:

    nice .. 'em iskool dayz
     
    ssslayer, Aug 8, 2005
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  5. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    skool sucked....but neways nice poem...
     
    cYpHeR, Aug 8, 2005
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  6. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening


    In my opinion, this is a "safe' piece. It makes an enjoyable read but is missing the creativity that gives us the edge in so many things. It's a topic most of us can connect to and agree with but it doesn't have the personalized touch to it which would give us your unique outlook on the days spent....right now it's a more generalized piece.


    Just my opinion....worth as much or as little as you want it to be.
     
    bjr, Sep 3, 2005
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  7. shak

    shak Harrr!

    i like it ...*and the tear rolls down the cheek*
     
    shak, Sep 3, 2005
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  8. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Hey ZOom!!

    nice poem dude :)
    do post some more

    PS: i really miss my school :((
     
    BubblyMartini, Sep 5, 2005
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  9. gnr311982

    gnr311982 New Member

    Those were the best days of my life
     
    gnr311982, Sep 5, 2005
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  10. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    skool s.uckedddddddddddddd,............. i hate ma skool for every reason possible :annoyed:
     
    akkyy21, Sep 5, 2005
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  11. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    Man those were the care-free days...we will never see again.....sigh!

    Damn you Zoom, Damn you!
     
    lord_neo, Sep 6, 2005
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  12. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    nice poem....brings bk d memories of school when we used to finish our food b4 the lunch & during the lunch we used to eat others food leaving them hungry :goof:
    I neva used to complete my homework....even then i used to score good marks in finals :rule: so this ws an excuse...
     
    Garima, Sep 7, 2005
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  13. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    what crap!

    i tried all that and neva got good marks ... :annoyed:
    :mad:
     
    ssslayer, Sep 9, 2005
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  14. beginner_lavina

    beginner_lavina hokay


    im wid u on this 1 cypher... school suxxx.... i no better! :mad:
     
    beginner_lavina, Sep 9, 2005
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  15. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    u passout n then u realise that anything else suxx even more ...

    hence school is better ...
     
    ssslayer, Sep 9, 2005
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  16. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Exactly!

    When the things are gone by.. we get to know its real value....



    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
    zoomingrocket, Sep 9, 2005
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  17. nik_bokacheley

    nik_bokacheley :help: I'm a mad :sadbye:

    :p:..Very good post ZOOM!! Nice one!! I really love my school days..Now wen i am growing, everythings soo crooked..I hate 'em..!!:eek::
     
    nik_bokacheley, Sep 9, 2005
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  18. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    A GENIUS IS NEVER UNDERSTOOD WHEN HE IS ALIVE - Calvin :nw:
     
    rocking_devil, Sep 10, 2005
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  19. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    U need to b 'smart worker' for that..... ;)
     
    Garima, Sep 14, 2005
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  20. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs &amp; Pasta

    Return to school and then u'll see. *Maturity alarm rings* Sh!t, i'm maturing too quickly :cry2:
     
    shsnawada, Sep 14, 2005
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