God read my earlier poem...another try

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Sep 29, 2005.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    hi .
    i am posting the new poetry with my imagination i felt that....God came to meet me after reading the earlier poetry

    Mind blowing....God says when he read the poetry
    good that you have at least thinking symmetry
    poetry depicts too much anger on me and my kingdom
    did someone provokes you to write about to get attention
    i was amazed on the effect.so early breakthrough
    he shouted on me....and then i said who are you?
    i thot your mind will be balanced
    but you are still unchanged ...
    u are writing the poetry on me proving myself wrong
    and thinking greater maturity area u belong.
    god says to me ..dont show the frustration on me
    i challenged to god...either me or u, let see..
    i was smiling thinking i won the battle...
    but god comes with another puzzle
    told me..rohit in your age i was like you
    on everystep i do think that i am above too
    the words made me silent and praising the lord
    destiny what i said to him...and he laughed aloud
    he patted on my back..and went ahead
    i waked up from my dream falling out of my bed


    note..if anyone has not read my earlier poem check the first one...this can be better related if you read the earlier one..thanks
  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Rohit, Our Official Spokesperson for Conversations with God!:)
    i like this poem aswell..
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^same here dude
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    make that dudette :)

    @astroguru...ru using any particular rhyming scheme or its just random rhyming for the ending syllable?? too hasty but nice work...
  5. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    its all comes with the thought and word imagination...not going with the rhyming actually..
    the content makes all the things into that type..

    thanks to all once again

  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    haha thanks vini!! never noticed this... dunno what makes people think am a guy!:eek::

    Anways thats off topic
    Astro dude, i'd like to read more conversations with god!
    that guy/gal up there doesnt get a spokesperson everyday!! ;)
  7. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    thanks.. bubbly martini...i appreciate what ever you said ...

    i will be happy to post another series of conversation ...on any topic with relevant issues

  8. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    trying still to contact god................


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