Girl- ready for marriage -.

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by aaabha, Aug 2, 2010.

  1. aaabha

    aaabha New Member

    they came they saw,
    her looks her draw
    made sure she was perfected

    then money and rights
    faults and brights
    ultimatly they said "rejected"

    she models every time
    for the knot, for the rhymes
    lets say "he" was more ambitious

    every time this happens
    she prepares, and when
    they go back, brings down her aspirations


  2. wow this is clan and smooth...i like this way of writing ...peotry according to me must never fill the entire canvas actully if less u draw and more thay can infer thats the best and that is wht this pice has done...superb..gud work!!

    Keep posting ur most welcome here :p
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    its amazin' true...simple...gr8..!! :)
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    its awesome...but somehow i feel i've read it somewhere else too
    wonder why, why is it so familiar?
  5. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Now that's a bit weird don't you think that?
    well its not plag 'cause the original poet already commented on this..

    ? What ? is ? this ?
    And specially reposting a poetry in the same forum..........LOL
    I'm confused :D



    according to the link sent by horsemouth.. monica wrote dis poem in da yr 2009 .. nd now when aabha copied da same poem.. she (monica) says "good work" to aabha in 2010???
    monica dosent recognises her own poem??? or she forgot about her poem coz she may also hv copied it from somewhere??? :p :p
  7. Hey ya its mine......:(
    i dont have memory of things but i felt it so on to the point as if i had writtent it...and that was true...u knw i had this thought is it mine, but it happens soo oftent that i read things and feel didnt i thought the same ( & they r by great ppl) thats y i generally dont try and find out if it were mine..... hey aabha dont copy u can write better than me girl .... anyways ...aaabha keep rocking!!

    Horse mouth thanks for reminding.. :D ... im dumb no Hard DriVe..sorry ..i dont knw what to say..!!



    hey monica... why r u blaming the wrong girl??? aabha copied ur poem . nandy just commented
  9. CARLOS my frind i do u see the fate of this forum ...its one of the most deserted area on this entire site.....y will anyone post things here ....when ther is veirtually no audiance ... i odnt have time to read things even y will i take the pains to copy ... i share beacasue i must...all must share good thoughts, versatile thoughts ...atlest this we all can do as humans !! ( i odnt knw if i answered u..wahtever)



    chill monica... :p..
  11. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    ooopss....!!! i din' understand nythin'....!! mein beech mein kahan se aa gayi...!?!??! i din' even join dis phorum in 2009...! :(:(:(
  12. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    well i hav another solution...monnie has MPD...
    :p :p :p
  13. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ahhh...u're a great poetess see? ppl copy ur poems...wish somone does that to me :D ... crediting me ofcourse ;)
  14. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    ummm...just predicting...
    maybe aabha wanted 2 say dt she liked this poem very much...n didn't kno how to comment...n that's why she started a new thread :D
    i love thinking differently ^_^
    @prafulla: dnt worry...i am here!!! :)
    m planning to copy ur poems :p :p :p n then i ll publish them with my signature ;)
  15. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ahem....does IGT have a consumer court forum?
    well nothing matters here anymore....his forum is well past dead :D

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