************************************************** they came they saw, her looks her draw made sure she was perfected then money and rights faults and brights ultimatly they said "rejected" she models every time for the knot, for the rhymes lets say "he" was more ambitious every time this happens she prepares, and when they go back, brings down her aspirations *********************************************** .
wow this is clan and smooth...i like this way of writing ...peotry according to me must never fill the entire canvas actully if less u draw and more thay can infer thats the best and that is wht this pice has done...superb..gud work!! Keep posting ur most welcome here
its awesome...but somehow i feel i've read it somewhere else too :-? wonder why, why is it so familiar?
https://indianguitartabs.com/showthread.php?t=39889 Now that's a bit weird don't you think that? well its not plag 'cause the original poet already commented on this.. ? What ? is ? this ? And specially reposting a poetry in the same forum..........LOL I'm confused
lol... according to the link sent by horsemouth.. monica wrote dis poem in da yr 2009 .. nd now when aabha copied da same poem.. she (monica) says "good work" to aabha in 2010??? monica dosent recognises her own poem??? or she forgot about her poem coz she may also hv copied it from somewhere???
Hey ya its mine...... i dont have memory of things but i felt it so on to the point as if i had writtent it...and that was true...u knw i had this thought is it mine, but it happens soo oftent that i read things and feel didnt i thought the same ( & they r by great ppl) thats y i generally dont try and find out if it were mine..... hey aabha dont copy u can write better than me girl .... anyways ...aaabha keep rocking!! Horse mouth thanks for reminding.. ... im dumb no Hard DriVe..sorry ..i dont knw what to say..!!
lol..again hey monica... why r u blaming the wrong girl??? aabha copied ur poem . nandy just commented ...lol...
CARLOS my frind i do u see the fate of this forum ...its one of the most deserted area on this entire site.....y will anyone post things here ....when ther is veirtually no audiance ... i odnt have time to read things even y will i take the pains to copy ... i share beacasue i must...all must share good thoughts, versatile thoughts ...atlest this we all can do as humans !! ( i odnt knw if i answered u..wahtever)
ooopss....!!! i din' understand nythin'....!! mein beech mein kahan se aa gayi...!?!??! i din' even join dis phorum in 2009...!
ahhh...u're a great poetess see? ppl copy ur poems...wish somone does that to me ... crediting me ofcourse
ummm...just predicting... maybe aabha wanted 2 say dt she liked this poem very much...n didn't kno how to comment...n that's why she started a new thread i love thinking differently ^_^ @prafulla: dnt worry...i am here!!! m planning to copy ur poems n then i ll publish them with my signature
ahem....does IGT have a consumer court forum? well nothing matters here anymore....his forum is well past dead