ghost

i woke up one evening
and was walking along
with my friend on my side
on the beach sand

said my friend
"think of one thing
you wouldn't wanna lose
in this life"

"why? you know it's you", said i
and she knew that i meant it
but she went silent
and held my hand

i closed my eyes
to feel the warmth
but i wouldn't feel any
it was just the mist of the sea

 

what cani say.it sounds like a kiddy story turned poem.

 

i am really :boxed: ....

 

i made that up in some 5 minutes ...

thanks for reading

 

ooo its really sweet in a sense yet impacting

 

well i atleast got thru to one person ... thanks browneyegurlie

 

WOW Pradeep! Great poem!!! I've read a lot of your previous poems but this one REALLY made me think! What's more amazing is that you wrote this in just under 5 minutes :shock: !! WAY TO GO BRO!!! :rock:

but really only SOME people can understand it. Hey Rocking_Devil, you say Iron Maiden rules yet u can't even understand this poem?! How utterly stupid! :annoyed:

BTW Pradeep HAS written some REALLY cool poems for my site too, so if you're interested check out his page here

https://lgames.hollosite.com/pradeepvjnpoetrypage.html

 

boy! you create poems like guitarist creates tunes....

 

meri kuch samajh nahin aya he he

 

Mere bhi nahin!
If u did it 5 min ago,.. y did u post it man, cud have worked on it for a while!! :

 

@santosh chris - :NoNo: Mr. :banana: HEAD , :war:

 

whoa ! **** ! : : santhosh oh man !


i feel stupid and flabbergasted at the same time ...

i thought only few would actually get the poem in the first place...

i don't try to write poems anymore, coz i figured out that one way or the other they are always so negative...so damn negative ...


i'm not that active in this group anymore ... thanks all