Ghazal-Kya boloon...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Ali Yawar, Aug 5, 2012.

  1. Ali Yawar

    Ali Yawar New Member

    Here is a traditional urdu ghazal(it is traditional if u leave a few things).Hope u'll like it...

    Sab saunp ke sab kuch loot liya,is ada ke aage kya boloon,
    Bewafa ho to fir gila karoon,bawafa ke aage kya boloon.

    Un jhuki-jhuki si nazron ka,koi jawaab mujhse ban na para,
    Koi baat ho to phir jawaab doon,ab dua ke aage kya boloon.

    Log kahen uske aage,tum chup-chup kyon ho jate ho
    Insan ho to baat karoon,ab khuda ke aage kya boloon.

    Ab mere gham ke qisse bhi,khatm hone ko aaye hain,
    Ab kya baat karoon shabe-hijran se,ab shama ke aage kya boloon.

    Ham jeete hain kaise ab tak,ye koi hamse mat puche,
    Uska naam liye jee lete hain,is baat ke aage kya boloon.
     
  2. i liked the thought process ...but i feel you can improve on the words !!!
     
  3. Ali Yawar

    Ali Yawar New Member

    their is not much to do there if I want to maint the traditional quality of the ghazal,but thanks ...
     

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