Games, they play!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by walk_alone, Aug 13, 2006.

  1. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Games, they play!!

    I looked out of window
    in a distant land
    I saw a bird
    crouched on a tree branch
    beaking on its prey
    devouring every part of it

    It reminded me of a truth
    Our lives, are games played by gods
    games, where they gag and laugh
    abandon the rules and conspire
    they deceive and delude
    and then hail their win

    mortals, that we are
    we can only cry, scream and howl
    and bow our heads to them
    waiting for that axe to fall
    and free us of misery and grief

    but you,oh so cunning you
    u wait and smile
    delaying the inevitable
    flaunting your might
    and then tear us apart bit by bit

    but I would be born again
    to challenge your might
    till the time
    we play by the rules
    when i dont get clawed down
    and I also have chance to win


    hey guys! iam posting smthng after a long long add in ur valuable comments for encouragement.

    thxs all for reading.
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  2. Glass

    Glass New Member

    I dedicate this post to all the creativity tht inspired u to write this marvel...LOve it...Can i copy it??
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Thxs dude.....u r new on IGT i guess coz never seen u around.
    well inspiration either comes from victories or tragedies.

    in my case its often the later.
    thxs for reading.

    paranoid13rohan likes this.
  4. Seher

    Seher New Member

    @ walk_alone.. You surely have that level of creativity in you.. Liked the poem very much.. Beautifuly you have transitted from a scene of nature to your thoughts and outlook..!!
    The blending of Survival of the fittest and The God as the one who handles us has been brought out in this piece of writting of yours..!!
    Hoping to see more of your writtings soon.. :)
  5. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    ^^ very true ... gr8 poem ... REPs coming ... :rock:
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    sahi hai...reps added
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    wow...i thot IGT was dead but am lad to get somany responses.

    Seher, thxs for ur compliments dear..they surely mean smthng.
    rohan and madhuresh, thxs to u guys too.

    i was in writer's block for a long time and somehow managed to free my mind from that stagnated mess...i feel much better.
  8. #iR@


  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    cudt disagree wit wat others have said.
    excellent work..
  10. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    nimi thxs for taking out sometime to read my poem.
    Hira, glad u liked it.....zyada shaitani nahi kiya karo. :)
  11. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Thts it no more comments? :(
    no has pointed even a single flaw in the poem.....i wonder why?
  12. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    Flaws? You want flaws to be pointed out in truth of life and love?
    Poetry is a way to express the truth, life, and love...
    There might be a few, but invisible in the context....
    BTW, nice one dude...good to see you back writing....
    Keep Writing and dont forget posting...
  13. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    hey thxs sharmaontime..................i wd definitely keep on posting if i get comments like yours.
  14. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    honestly, i wouldn have imagined you would write such abstract yet comprehendable work
    its good..
    good imagery......
    but you could've done better
    i gues this was the first and only take..
  15. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    You are right...everyone can better themselves with little bit od additional effort.

    thxs for ur candid openion.
    and luking for more of that in future.

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  16. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    it surely was one of your bests...
  17. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Thxs Crazy......its gud to hear from you again.

  18. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    reviving an old thread and certainly my favourite.
  19. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    gr8 work dude!
  20. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    OMG.....its rilly your best
    infact i liked every line of the poem...
    gr8 work...cant rep though

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