Games, they play!

Games, they play!!

I looked out of window
in a distant land
I saw a bird
crouched on a tree branch
beaking on its prey
devouring every part of it

It reminded me of a truth
Our lives, are games played by gods
games, where they gag and laugh
abandon the rules and conspire
they deceive and delude
and then hail their win

mortals, that we are
we can only cry, scream and howl
and bow our heads to them
waiting for that axe to fall
and free us of misery and grief

but you,oh so cunning you
u wait and smile
delaying the inevitable
flaunting your might
and then tear us apart bit by bit

but I would be born again
to challenge your might
till the time
we play by the rules
when i dont get clawed down
and I also have chance to win

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hey guys! iam posting smthng after a long long time...do add in ur valuable comments for encouragement.

thxs all for reading.

 

I dedicate this post to all the creativity tht inspired u to write this marvel...LOve it...Can i copy it??

 

Thxs dude.....u r new on IGT i guess coz never seen u around.
well inspiration either comes from victories or tragedies.

in my case its often the later.
thxs for reading.

 

@ walk_alone.. You surely have that level of creativity in you.. Liked the poem very much.. Beautifuly you have transitted from a scene of nature to your thoughts and outlook..!!
The blending of Survival of the fittest and The God as the one who handles us has been brought out in this piece of writting of yours..!!
Hoping to see more of your writtings soon..

 

^^ very true ... gr8 poem ... REPs coming ... :rock:

 

sahi hai...reps added

 

wow...i thot IGT was dead but am lad to get somany responses.

Seher, thxs for ur compliments dear..they surely mean smthng.
rohan and madhuresh, thxs to u guys too.

i was in writer's block for a long time and somehow managed to free my mind from that stagnated mess...i feel much better.

 

CHA GAYA HAI YAAR! u r BACK! WOHOOOOO! :rock:

 

cudt disagree wit wat others have said.
excellent work..

 

nimi thxs for taking out sometime to read my poem.
Hira, glad u liked it.....zyada shaitani nahi kiya karo.

 

Thts it no more comments?
no has pointed even a single flaw in the poem.....i wonder why?

 

Flaws? You want flaws to be pointed out in truth of life and love?
Poetry is a way to express the truth, life, and love...
There might be a few, but invisible in the context....
BTW, nice one dude...good to see you back writing....
Keep Writing and dont forget posting...

 

hey thxs sharmaontime..................i wd definitely keep on posting if i get comments like yours.

 

honestly, i wouldn have imagined you would write such abstract yet comprehendable work
its good..
good imagery......
but you could've done better
i gues this was the first and only take..

 

You are right...everyone can better themselves with little bit od additional effort.

thxs for ur candid openion.
and luking for more of that in future.

 

it surely was one of your bests...

 

Thxs Crazy......its gud to hear from you again.

 

reviving an old thread and certainly my favourite.

 

gr8 work dude!

 

OMG.....its rilly your best
infact i liked every line of the poem...
gr8 work...cant rep though