well friends, this is more a kind of submission, just some lines full of love, that i once presented to my love. FOR THE FIRST TIME, HAVE I EVER SEEN, THE WIND CHIMES, CAUSING WINDS TO BLOW, AND THE FORCE IT CAPTURES IN ITS STEEL, SAY MANY THINGS UNSAID. THERE ARE OTHER TIMES, WHEN YOU LOOK AT ME, AND SPELL-BOUND I FOLLOW, GIRL YOU BETTER CHANGE YOUR CRAZY WAYS, OR THIS WORLD SOMEDAY WUD COME TO REST, HOW YOU STEAL THE TIME, AWAY FROM ME, I COULD NEVER KNOW, PEOPLE SAY I'M THE BEST OF THE THIEVES, BUT I SAY YOU ARE THE BEST. from: Shashank :beer: girls feedback invited.
Well I'll try to continue, but this is because of inspiration of some other fellow who's an active member of this community (Cryptic_Angel)
Thnx dear I have made the changes(was a show of my carelessness) . It shows that u read it carefully.
Hey Shanky... nice poem dude jus noticed its been a year since you joined IGT and howcome only 5 posts.. been a CC lounge regular is it? do post some more poems its always nice to read diffrent kinda poems Psst...By the way What did your "love" say about the poem
Hey naughties, you know watever she might hav said, but the point is that i cudnt make her mine. But, well! i dont mind these kinda things, hav now got used to this. Hey did u see my new "AVATAR"??? I hav drawn it myself this & some of the other sketches also i have drawn.
Hey naughties, you know watever she might hav said, but the point is that i cudnt make her mine. But, well! i dont mind these kinda things, hav now got used to this. moreover she wasn't my kind. Hey did u see my new "AVATAR"??? I hav drawn it myself this & some of the other sketches also i have drawn.
cooool avy!!!! and see, i was right when i told u to post ur poem :rule:, it has got more response than d 1st poem i posted here!! way to go!! :rock:
thats right!!! but, u c the problem is that i dont really get the time now to write or even post poems, but thanks for ur unconditional support &, wat shud i say, response!!! :beer: Enjoy urself :rock: Take care :dance:
