Frozen in time!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by apurbajd, May 28, 2006.

  1. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    Frozen in time all those moments
    Hidden in my heart all those feelings
    Some stories that remained untold
    some wishes that remained to be wished
    some confessions I never made
    and the promises I never kept

    Sometimes looking back
    wondering into the past aimless
    I meet some new faces
    each one with a new story
    A story that is never told completely

    I get closer to the truth
    one more clue closer
    which leads me to yet another clue
    and the journey never ends

    And life is so at lost
    a touch of loneliness is all it costs
    to compensate for all those moments
    for all those untold stories and broken promises
  2. Guitar boy

    Guitar boy New Member

    cool one man!

    and u watched AXN yesterday nite, at 11 PM?
  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    nice one...@apur
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    apurb not very well worked out man .... so so kuch likho to kuch to likho actually first the thought is hackneyed and u did'nt add any thing to make it intrusting bakwaass
  5. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    apurba...i dint get the theme.maybe u can elaborate on it a bit.
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    seems that it has some hidden story to it... anyway NICE WORK! :)
  7. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    @Guitar boy thanx dude. No I didnt watch AXN, y u asked btw?

    @amit thanx man...

    @madhuresh ... thanx for the honest comment yaar. I know its no masterpiece. My thoughts were kinda haywire when i wrote that . Mya be I'll do better next time

    @walk_alone ... bro , may be u'll get the theme if u read it once again(if its aint that bad!), neway thanx for reading and sorry I cant elaborate on this, as its kinda inspired by a personal experience so I'd like to keep it to myself. All I can say is that every1 does some mistakes in past and then they repent it sometimes but that never seems to be enough to correct the past mistakes...

    @Hira.... kinda yes! thanx for reading :)
  8. Guitar boy

    Guitar boy New Member

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    YIPEEEEEEEEE...... i GUESSED RITE! :dance:

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