freestyle VII

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by sidblake, May 2, 2011.

  1. sidblake

    sidblake New Member

    imagism now
    too many metaphors
    too many bridges and connections
    without showing concretia
    I am sitting on a bed
    there is a blue pen also resting on the bed,
    about 35 degrees slanted upwards
    buzzing of the fridge is constant
    I hear mechanical noises intermittently
    unknown is the source
    there is one lamp on in my bedroom
    a few lights are on in the bathroom
    stillness is not here
    but hardly is cacophony
    peaceful is the night
    yet unsettled is my heart.

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