Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Asmodeus, Feb 11, 2005.

  1. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    Yeah... rediscovering old files... hehehehe...
    This was my first shot at this kind of a thing... and the best coincidence, was that this was written exactly a year before.... cuz well, something fell out pre-V-day... man, I never am good when it comes around!

    We started off just like everyone else
    Cool and calm... yeah, like friends
    There was no friction, just innocence
    ****, didn't know that it wouldn't be so ever since

    'Cuz one day, I had a sudden urge
    My world, my life, it resurged
    How was I to know that it wasn't meant to be?
    ****, but I realized that it's better to be free

    Free, free from all cares
    Free, free from the tears
    Free, free from the worries
    Free, free from you and me

    Back in time, it felt like a dream
    But now looking back I can only scream
    No need now to lament
    Gotta get movin from this bent

    Movin' on is a simple thing
    What's left behind pricks like a sting
    The best thing that happened to me
    Wasn't back then, but now, 'cuz I'm free

    Free, free from the misery
    Free, free from the pain
    Free, free from all sufferings,
    Free, free from going insane
  2. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwww awwwwwwwwwwwwwwsummmmmmmmmmmmm

  3. shak

    shak Harrr!

    cool!!!...would you mind if i make a song out of it @asmo ??
  4. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    **** man.. this one's too good... evn bettr than the othr 1..

    @shahrukh. i was wonderin when some1 wud come up with tht idea.. its worth 2 be made into a song :)
  5. smriti

    smriti // Silent Observer //

    good 1 Asmodeus...........................u better go on with such stuff
  6. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    @asm.. awesome dude.. cool work... specially the below part

  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    @asmo, it will be a nice song........koool
  8. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    WOW... I neva thought this would actually be so... well, hope you people ain't pullin my leg or something...

    @ Shahrukh = go on ahead... jus request... dont try to make it too much of a ballad.. something like on the likes of Metallica's Until It Sleeps... ya know, the Chorus has to have the punch... totally!
  9. shak

    shak Harrr!

    yeah... i'll make it head spinin mad!!!
    free(screaming) .. two E5 @ 1/16
    free(screaming) .. two G5 @ 1/16
    and then the chorus..
    |-----3-----2-0-----3........ @260 b.p.m

    hehehe ... hope you get the feel!!
  10. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    dude... record it if ya can... and post it here... dat'll make it damn neato...
    I get you.. but like, I wanna hear it better played
  11. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    pretty good......everyone wishes to be free...from something.
  12. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    Man, that was nice work. waiting for shahrukh to post the song...
  13. shak

    shak Harrr!

    i dont have a lead singer ... :( :( :( ... i cant sing cuz my voice is worse than croaking frogs...sorry guys ... you'll have to put up until i find a decent singer...
  14. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    Dude... jus post the song... singing, leave that to me, hehehe!!!!!

    PS... wtf is ur title tryin to say???
  15. shak

    shak Harrr!

    no prob ..
    and it says "True am I to my country!" in welsh .. :)

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