Forgiveness III - Out of Sight

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Jul 15, 2009.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Its been long since the rain,
    I've been ever seeing the sky,
    through a hole in the wall,
    giant figures blocking my sight.

    Now its the last hour of dusk,
    I see around me a sea of light.
    Its been so long since you've gone,
    and I'm so close yet out of sight.

    These strings of melodies
    pierce the needles of prickly silence.
    But my words still mean nothing to you,
    Maybe my thoughts are still out of sight.

    But you'll forever stay inside of me,
    I just need to close my eyes.
    I just want to ask for forgiveness,
    I just want to break the ice.
    I still carry this quill in my hands,
    To pen my thoughts before they elope with the wind.
    To show you how I missed our world,
    Someday, we'll meet when you're kind.
    The pictures, though out of sight,
    are forever burnt in my mind.
  2. distorted

    distorted satan

    Gud job, keep it up mate...
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    nice one,,,keep posting
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks thanks..
  5. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    oh i'm so tired of praising u!!!
    but it won't bother me if i will say that once more :)
    really good!!
  6. suprita

    suprita New Member

    really nice. keep it up!!!!
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks both of you!

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