forget me not

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by abhimanjrekar, Oct 15, 2005.

  1. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    I can't figure what
    Exactly it is I should do,
    For I have conflicting feelings
    And thoughts of you.

    My heart is in torment,
    My head is confused,
    My dignity is in shreds,
    My pride is bruised.

    My heart says I should be honest
    And tell you how I feel,
    But my head says don't be stupid
    My heart - it may kill.

    So, which is it,
    My head or my heart?
    This decision I must make
    Is tearing me apart.

    I can't get through a day
    Without thinking of you,
    I know this is crazy
    But what can I do?

    Sometimes when it's late
    And I cannot sleep,
    I think of you
    And often weep.

    For you live there
    And I live here,
    The distance between us is huge
    How can I not shed a tear?

    So, it seems my heart
    Has won the fight,
    Because I must know for sure
    If you are my Mr. Right.

    Do you like me?
    Do you even care?
    Or are these feelings
    Only what I share?

    These are the answers
    That I must know,
    So I can find out
    Just how deep my feelings go.......
  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Nice poem..
    Note: do mention if the poems are your own...
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    actually ppl r supposed 2 mention it when d poems r NOT their own...

    coz this a forum for original stuff.. so unless it is mentioned, it is assumed to be ur original work......

    and this doesnt seem original...
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^^oh, unless of course...........(u know what i mean)
  5. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    no not all angel..lollz..actually its not my work.....i don write poems....if only original work is allowed plz tell,ill stop..else ill post poems but of course not MY WORK.......
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    u can post em.. but do mention it's not urs...


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