For my love..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by vishwa_81us, Jan 5, 2006.

  1. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Ek Ehsaas ( named by Nimisha )

    Dear All,

    Just need ur comments.. and a title for the poem... i hope u like it..

    this poem is straight form my heart.. for the sweetest girl on earth...

    is shor se kahin door aa chal chalen..
    in anknon mein kuch sapne piroye..
    tanhai ka daman saath lapete..
    pyar ke kuch pal chupaye..

    hathon mein bas tera haath ho..
    baarish ki rim jhim boondon ka saath ho
    tanhai ki shehnai mein gum sum..
    payar mein nahate bas hum tum..

    kuch kehte kehte tere lavon ka ruk jaana..
    kuch sunte sunte mera kahin kho jana..
    khule zulfon ka aapas mein takraana..
    haya ke sheeshe mein sharm ka sharmana..

    dil ka bas ek armaan pura ho jaye..
    yeh waqt ka dariya yahin tham jaye..
    is pal ke dhage mein hum yun bandh jayen..
    khud kkhuda bhi hamein na juda kar paye...
  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i never saw vishwa writting such soft romance..
    is it really written by u..or kisi ki jhaap ke laaye....

    but yes....its nice..
    light romantic.. n nice..!
  3. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    nimisha wat ever i have written till today may b good or bad or funny.. all r original.. and this one too.. if u hv any doubt use : GOOGLE

    thanks for liking it..

    and give it a cute title..
  4. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    it's nice.
  5. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    @ vishwa kaun hain woh bechari??
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    yes... i do believe....
    n as i said earlier..its nice too...

    how about a name... Ek armaan...
  7. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    thanx nimmo.. but sounds like Jassi Jaisi Koi Nahi's Armaan has written this for jassi.. :p: plz sumthing else.. sumthing that touches heart..
  8. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    see if u like these...

    ehsaas..dilon ka

    ek waqt..rukaa saa!

    tanahaa pal..
  9. ElysiaN

    ElysiaN d@Rk\/\/@|\|deReR

    gud work vishwa...reps for u!!!!!!!
  10. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Ek Ehsaas kaisa hi...

    taken... thanx nimmo..

    n thanx to evryone for the love and those reps.. i think soon i m going to make IGT clean ( by not posting erotica ) and Green ( my changing by red dots to green)
  11. PakPride

    PakPride New Member

    HAHA ...Jassi...I havent seen that drama for such a long time :( off topic... awesome job Vishwa...its so touching...i wish someone would write that for me :(

    its ok...someday :)
  12. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    @vishwa .. i bet if i start studying astronomy from today .. then i'l become an astronaut before ur red dots become green .. :p: isn't it :p:
  13. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    You're forever flowing with passions...
    Your mind and your words...all so sweet....
    They fell on my ears like kisses....
    and numbed me rite down to my feet.....
  14. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    rofl.. !!!! .. good.. u should start study then.. !! atleast vishwa gonna bring some good to u..
  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Nice poem Vishwa....& this time i dint laf at all...cos that ws touching...
  16. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Thank u so much all of u for that love..

    u ppl made me cry.. *crying* tears of happiness...
    CrYpTiC_angel likes this.
  17. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    that was really good!
  18. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    How Touchy! :cry1: ;) :RollLol: :RollLol:

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