Ek Ehsaas ( named by Nimisha ) Dear All, Just need ur comments.. and a title for the poem... i hope u like it.. this poem is straight form my heart.. for the sweetest girl on earth... is shor se kahin door aa chal chalen.. in anknon mein kuch sapne piroye.. tanhai ka daman saath lapete.. pyar ke kuch pal chupaye.. hathon mein bas tera haath ho.. baarish ki rim jhim boondon ka saath ho tanhai ki shehnai mein gum sum.. payar mein nahate bas hum tum.. kuch kehte kehte tere lavon ka ruk jaana.. kuch sunte sunte mera kahin kho jana.. khule zulfon ka aapas mein takraana.. haya ke sheeshe mein sharm ka sharmana.. dil ka bas ek armaan pura ho jaye.. yeh waqt ka dariya yahin tham jaye.. is pal ke dhage mein hum yun bandh jayen.. khud kkhuda bhi hamein na juda kar paye...
i never saw vishwa writting such soft romance.. is it really written by u..or kisi ki jhaap ke laaye.... but yes....its nice.. light romantic.. n nice..!
nimisha wat ever i have written till today may b good or bad or funny.. all r original.. and this one too.. if u hv any doubt use : GOOGLE thanks for liking it.. and give it a cute title..
thanx nimmo.. but sounds like Jassi Jaisi Koi Nahi's Armaan has written this for jassi.. : plz sumthing else.. sumthing that touches heart..
Ek Ehsaas kaisa hi... taken... thanx nimmo.. n thanx to evryone for the love and those reps.. i think soon i m going to make IGT clean ( by not posting erotica ) and Green ( my changing by red dots to green)
HAHA ...Jassi...I havent seen that drama for such a long time Neways..im off topic... awesome job Vishwa...its so touching...i wish someone would write that for me its ok...someday
@vishwa .. i bet if i start studying astronomy from today .. then i'l become an astronaut before ur red dots become green .. : isn't it :
You're forever flowing with passions... Your mind and your words...all so sweet.... They fell on my ears like kisses.... and numbed me rite down to my feet.....