For all gr8 poets/poetesses of IGT

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by sukriti_hats, May 2, 2010.

  1. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    okie...i have written this specially for all the awesome poets n poetesses of IGT
    u ppl rock...i luv ur poems
    so...here's a poem for u all...it's tribute+request :*

    Your beautiful words and elegant lines
    Are like sparkling shades amidst the purple flames
    They inspire the little poetess inside me
    And make my mind play tricky games

    But I’m far too upset, far too tensed
    Far too worried about the consequence
    So I’m asking for help, just do me a favor
    Take my hand, take me in and be my savior

    Make me a stanza of your poem
    And speak my words through your lips
    Make me a stanza of your song
    And sing me with dedication, as devotee worships

    Make me a rose of your garden
    And water me everyday with your highness
    Make me a diamond of your crown
    And wear it everyday to enhance your exquisiteness

    Keep me as a color in your palette
    And paint your words with my thoughts
    Make me a boat, sailing on your mighty sea
    And take me through the sun-kissed fiords

    I’ve found the doors
    which will lead me to happiness…but no keys
    Because only the opaque tangle of unbearable echoes
    Can determine my soliloquies

    -Sukriti Hatgaonkar
     
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  2. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Suweeeeeett ... ita amazin Sukriti. Very well done and beautifully composed. Love it.
     
  3. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    thnk u thnk u thnk u ^_^
    m shoooooo happy :)
     
  4. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    you have set a bar for urself now ... keep It improving. best of luck
     
  5. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Bravo... very nice !!!
     
  6. Now this is ur first...god ...ur a born talent ..Keep rocking!!
     
  7. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    @ricky: thank you :)
    @monica: well i usually dont share my poems wid evry1 coz they're too private ;)
    but i wrote this one for u ppl only...
     
  8. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    dats so vry sweet of u.....luv u 'gain gal.....mvaaaaaah
    i'd've Repp'd it 10 times if permitted!

    u can share ur thoughts 'ere, its y dis place is... perhaps the reason y none f my relatives n frnds know i write poetry.. we (at IGT) 're kinda family who know each other by thoughts n nt faces!
     
  9. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    maybe u r right
    well...thank you very much ^_^
     
  10. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    d poem is reallY verY sweet actuallv its awesm!!!!.... :).... u write verY well.... :) alwaYs keep such accolades in mind nd u'd soar high...gud luck!!! :)
     
  11. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    thank you :)
     
  12. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    simply great...n the fact tht its dedicated to ppl here makes it all the more memorable
    keep it up!
     
  13. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    awesum lines sukriti...i wish i cud write like that
     
  14. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    @allstarsband: it is not dedicated to everyone :p:p:p:p
    only to the 'awesome' poets/esses of IGT :)
    well thnx a lot for appreciation :):)

    @metalhead: one thing...m not an awesome poet....there r so many ppl around like horsesmouth, monica n walk_alone...who write far far faaaaaaaaaaaarrr better than me
    and if u try u can obviously write better than these best ppl....bcoz...
    there's always someone better than the best :):):)
    that's the only way i can help u buddy....keep trying and once u r done wid it...post it here :)
     
  15. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @sukriti
    u understate urself gal......there's no1 best here...we're all the best...just evry1 writes in diff forms....
    u're very very good...10/10
    ;)
     

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