following my dreams

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Sep 24, 2011.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    finding my dreams in streets filled with dust
    i look at all the fame and cash with eyes brimming with lust
    and thinking about all of this i say to myself..yeah i will fight..if i must
    i look deep into hundreds of eyes
    i find fear..hidden deep beneath the lies
    my silence ..out loud it screams
    i know life ain't always roses and creams
    i don't care what it takes.. i will follow my dreams
    i never learnt to work in teams
    ill ride solo..with faith and determination my face beams
    yes..i will..i freaking will follow my dreams..!!
     
  2. good lines ...follow my dreams...accha hai :p
     
  3. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    Nice. :) Especially the rhymes. ^_^
     
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    @monica .. y am i smellin smthin sarcastic.. :p
    @poison ... thank you... :D
     
  5. nope ..i smtimes wounder the dream of fame and wealth ist it a marketting gimmic ... :D no offence but i often wounder
     
  6. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    Fame is overrated and wealth is relative.

    You're never 'wealthy enough', you always want more. It's a shallow, destructive path.
     
  7. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    well .. people dream to get fame and wealth...coz..others love you if u hav em both..and trust me in the hearts of hearts uu will agree wit me on this point..
     
  8. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    Others love your fake personality or your wealth, not 'you' exactly. So what's so much fun in being a shallow person only known for what they show they are, or for their money.

    It's a sad life.
     
  9. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    life ain't fair..people talk shit..love it..people talk crap..act like crap
    but at the end of it all..we all are a part of the same god damned rap..
     
  10. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    Well, if we hopelessly accept that we're just a part of it all, then we're just as sad as the others. Life isnt fair, but we must be fair to ourselves first and stand up for what we are.

    We are surrounded by crap, but at least we shouldnt be the ones contributing to it. [:
     
  11. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    lol ...u jus contradicted your own statement..well in a way..u said..its a sad life before.. :p

    but whats ther not to accept..we all ARE apart of it..
     
  12. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    What i said was, the life revolving around fame and wealth is sad. So we must stand apart from that and accept ourselves for who we are, instead of showing something we're not.

    We ARE a part of this world, doesn't mean we live for them.
     
  13. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    ohh.. hmm i misunderstood..sorry..
     
  14. Poison...

    Poison... New Member

    It's okay. Great poem, all in all. (Y)
     
  15. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thank you.. :)
     

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