nah, u need lots more of practice ditto to what the last post said, its too slow and full of mistakes, i'd add to that the guitar sounded severely detuned in places.
yup! u need more practise... and plz tell the tabs after that fast part ... e|-05-8-7-8-5-8-7-8-7-10-8-10-7-10-8-10-8-12-10-12-8-12-10-12-----
good effort man. it is slow but it dont sound bad .u have made a mistake here n there but overall its ok ..just pickup the tempo and fix up the ending and ur solo is complete
