These are few lines I wrote for the first time when I thot of writing... It was way bk in April 2003 this was for the first time he came to my house...& I expressed my emotions like this (all of my frnds laughed there heart out, when they heard these lines...So, all the best to u ppl aswell ) * Ek jhalak ki umeed lagaye baithe hum yahan par, Wo aaye is tarah ki hawaon ko khabar bhi na chali; Meheka ke fizaon ko aise gaye, Ki aakhoan ko hamari khabar bhi na chali. * Ek baar aakar is ghar me tumne jaan daal di; Ab tak to aisa lagta tha ki saanse sirf hum hi le rahe the. *Muskurahat me teri khushboo hai saare jahan ki, Tabhi hum sochein ki foolo se khushbu kahan gayi. *Ek nazar ne teri maar dala humko, Un to kal tak saanse hum bhi liya karte the. *Aaye tum aise jaise chand neela ambar oadh kar aaya ho, Dekh kar tumhe laga ki tum koi or nahi mera hi saya ho. *Sham se raat ho gayi,din badal gaya, taareekh badal gayi, Nahi badla to ek khayal ki tu abhi bhi hai mere paas. *Nazarein milane se darr lagta hai, Kyuki izhaar se darr lagta hai; Pata na chal jaye tujhe meri deewangi ka, Kyuki mujhe tere Inkaar se darr lagta hai.
deep emotions always has an impression on our thinking attitude and our emotional quotient..........your lines clearly reflects your adorable presence till date.............in your life even it is misty.............. congrats to you for sharing the versatilty with the words...... time is best panacea......... good post...garima rohit
like this ---> Muhuhahahaa :RollLol: hey i dunno but i likd your poetry, dont see any reason to laff on it?
hey what about this one: First time dekha tumhe hum khogaya ... second time mein love hogaya ... yeh akkha India jaanta hai ham tum pe marta hai ...
@rohit, spy ...bobbit...thank u guys.. @jekyll...thanks...&btw wat dint I tell u...these lines??? thodi roshni daalo.... @no problems Shahrukh beta....just lemme kno which words or which line in specific @akkyy ...how did u come to bout this?? I neva shared this with any1 ....<lolz> @jekyll...for ur shayyerri...if this the way u write...then pls stop writing ... ok ok....i wont discourage u...but b original nxt time :annoyed: :grin:
wow....really touching song.....may be u had a lotta things in store for that guy! aur yeh kasi ajeeb bhaat hai ?!.....usually, boyz are scared of proposing to gals but here u being a gal are scared of proposing to that fellow! so now what??......are u gonna pass away the rest of your life awaiting him?:grin:......use the priciple of opportunity cost.......go for the next best thing!:rockon:
wow....nice words there garima,i see no reason ppl should laugh on this.....its really touching.....keep writing...
thnx for the trans garry, knowing your circumstancs, i really do understand the poem ... nice one i like this bit the best Nazarein milane se darr lagta hai, Kyuki izhaar se darr lagta hai; Pata na chal jaye tujhe meri deewangi ka, Kyuki mujhe tere Inkaar se darr lagta hai.
Gary, that is really nice thought.....i like the way u write.I am also not very gud at writing but u will soon see some of my poems here.....completed dedicated to someone special...Good Luck.
