first kiss...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Mar 13, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    this poem needs no introduction...
    a title is enough to tell...wats it all about...


    First kiss...

    strong desires and weak knees..
    eyes closed for the enchanted dreams...

    making impervious mind.....lucid..
    obscure thoughts..turning into ...vivid..

    a ticklish numbness..
    awakening to the newfound sensations..
    whole world in the virtigo..
    refusing all prejudices and hesitations..

    aura of the exctacy..
    perception of emmence illusions n fantacy..

    bit by bit.. unfolding the secretes of seductions..
    revealing mysteries.. that this moment..
    gonna lead you to....infinite addictions...

    First step in the world of never ending dreams..
    First page in the book of passion n desires..
    First leap to reach for the stars..
    First sweet surrenderence..
    First pleasure of life..
    First Kiss....



    comments plz...
     
  2. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    beautiful poem there nimisha... lol how do make such poems? ?? :confused:
     
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  3. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    Love it dear..... can feel the sweet sweet sensation of lovely lovely kissie kissie...... so if words can make u feel then tht means ..reps..:) muahaa

    sachoo
     
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  4. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    n yea...reps comin ur way... :)
     
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  5. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    woooow

    hmmmmmmm seeeems someone had one's first kiss;) just joking :eek:: ;)

    cool work sis

    :shock: :shock:

    kyaaa huaaa recently bahut poem likhrahe ho??? :think:
     
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  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    thanks...har1s...
    i dont write poems....
    thoughts just occur to me..
    glad u appreciated it...:nw:
     
  7. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @sachho....
    thanks dear......
    muahhh for your reps...

    @spy-game...
    nowdays....climate is bit romantic....thats why such poem...

    n my sweet bro.....plzzz dont tell this to mom-dad okkk....:NoNo:
     
  8. bsharp

    bsharp New Member

    hey gal, u really rocked..
    :rock:
    Plz do send such poems more..

    I liked this part the most..
    "a ticklish numbness..
    awakening to the newfound sensations..
    whole world in the virtigo..
    refusing all prejudices and hesitations..
    "
     
  9. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e &lt;3V/S&lt;3 50 CeNt$

    schoool ki yaad agayi :p:

    as usual one more mindblowing poem frm nimisha

    reps if it permits ;)
     
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  10. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @bsharp... :nw: :nw: :nw:
    keep replying...like such, n i'll keep writting..

    @sanju...
    school ki yaad???
    why???:think: :think:

    ohh.... first kiss yaad aagayi....;)
    what bout second? third? forth? fifth? sixth?... mind sharing it???;)
     
  11. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    hm......muahaaa............
     
  12. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e &lt;3V/S&lt;3 50 CeNt$



    meri kiss ka majak maat udav :cry1:
     
  13. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    I say, that's actually a nice poem. Imagery has improved, very good!
     
  14. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    ^^lol @ sanju

    i dont think anyone remember their the sec third forth well if its not from someone really special :p:
     
  15. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    :eek:: :eek:: :eek:: :eek::
     
  16. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @sanju... mazaak nahi udaaya re....
    @spy.... rytly said...thats why poetries r written on first kiss only... n not on second..third.. forth..

    @disturb.....
    nice to hear that praise from boss.....:nw: :nw: :nw:
     
  17. merwan

    merwan New Member

    you are interesting.................................gr8 job
     
  18. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Ooooh la la...

    That was certainly a nice poem!

    I remember there was an erotic poem that you had written... you seem to be good at writing such poems :grin:
     
  19. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    ^^ wohooo line maar raha hain
     
  20. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    :think: :think: :think: :think:

    if a guy tellls me this sentence after my first kiss...
    i'll kick his .....
     

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