Festival of horror

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Nirvanafreak, Mar 23, 2005.

  1. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Bound by darkness,senseless for the light,
    No one gets me out of this,perhaps you might,
    Death seething through your veins,
    Forever bleeding,the pressure gains,
    A festival of reapers,a former patient of death row,
    The manifest of creepers,drowning by the flow,
    Body parts flying everywhere,splattering on the floor,
    Shattered pieces of yesterday's door,
    People passing away,a beautiful massacre,
    Grounded by life itself,blood on a broken dagger,
    Maybe it is all so simple,too simple to be true,
    I'm bound by darkness,but pulled away by you...

    First poem in a long time (a few weeks :p:)
    Feedback please? :think:
  2. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    Good 1 Good 1....
    liked ur poem...
  3. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    hey there...thnx,you think I should put this one in my manuscript?
  4. Bristy

    Bristy ...

  5. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful lines....
    Keep it up!


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