Feeling

It is an emotional state,
Not a soul has escaped

You can not even describe
Can only feel it inside

Its got the power
To make you lose ur mind

And you just cant control
urself from losing
the time

As much as you take
You'd wanna give it back

Or even ten folds more
This feeling,
Oh its abstract.

Ok. Enof descriptions
Im ending the poem

Cuz purpose is served,
Ive escaped.
this f...ing -
"boredom"

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The bleeped put word isnt what u think it is

 

i liked it ...atleast some thing new

 

da strting is a good poem.....bt da ending makes it look lyk a croem....lol...newayz good work....

 

starting was ordinary.. end was awesome, gives good contrast..

 

nimisha and i gt opposite views somehow.............hmmmm we betta work on dat no????lol.....

 

lol yea... or even better, both of you work on a third view: "the whole poem was cool" xD