Feeling Expressing Themselves!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Feb 22, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    Hi all IGTIANS! Now I am sure that the way I am riting this poem no one has ever done it before and even if they have,:eek:: they would have never exactly told you guys. So here goes…
    I am in my car right now, looking out of the window and lahore right now seems to be like heaven. I am riting on this piece of paper and watever I rite will be typed on the computer once I get to log on to IGT. Anyway so I am looking out of the window and the wind is gushing, its drizzling and the sky *looks at the sky and tries to make it sound poetic:p: * seems to be crying… but these tears r of joy! Ok now this is more like an essay so let me just start off with my poem… hope u guys like it… here goes…


    The wind gushing
    With a whistling sound
    The rain drops
    Completing my life
    The sky shrouded in grey
    Shedding tears of joy
    Everything appears to be so pleasant
    Today I feel I am in love
    But I know this isn’t true
    It’s the joy deep down
    That is emerging
    Like the shinning sun
    From behind the dark clouds
    It’s the joy that has been hiding
    Deep in my heart
    Fearing to reveal itself
    Then is time that thoughts conquer my mind;
    That happiness is always followed by sorrows
    But I just believe
    That after every murky night
    There’s always a new dawn
    A dawn that brings new hopes
    New smiles
    New horizons
    Yet again the cycle continues
    Happiness followed by sorrows
    And sorrows followed by joys
    All I need to do is
    Listen to my heart
    And lead this life
    And hold tight my dreams
    Dreams that will never fade away
    Dreams that no one can snatch from me
    Dreams that will always remain mine…
    And mine alone!

    THANKS A TONNNN FOR READING... hope u guys liked it! and plzzzz don't forget to comment... rote this poem in 15 mins... comments plzz......:cool:
    i'm_not_neo, rizaaj and Varshita like this.
  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    I liked it very much....cos i neva wrote like this....seems that u r in LOVE.......

    with NATURE :p:
    cos now-a-days u r writing so much about skies,wind, stars, moon.....

    goooood goin...reps if permitted:)
  3. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    wow...feelings seem to pour out fast when you are in what you are writing..*wonders if that made any sense*....some nice lines you wrote hira..keep it up...i think u should travel more often...;)
  4. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Hmmm intresting...uv expressd urself really well!:)
  5. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Good one... reps for you !!
  6. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    yes Garima is Right............u r in Love!!!!
  7. nimitr

    nimitr New Member

    #iR@ ...... nothing to say except ..... :nw:

    gooooooooood work ... keep it up :)
  8. #iR@


    @ garima... thanks... yea maybe i am:think: NAHhhh i don't think soo! :p:

    @ hardik... thanks man! :)

    @ knight ppl... thanks a lot both of u! ;)

    @ walk_alone... NAHI YAAR>... abhi kahan! :p:

    @ nimitr... THANKS A LOT MAN! :nw:

    @ rizaaj... thanks for the reps man! :)
  9. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Awesome!!this is really beautiful..there's something about it...I don't know..maybe that I can relate to it..And you've painted a beautiful (and highly poetic) picture..great work:dance:
  10. #iR@


    ^ thx a lot man :) always looking fwd to ur comments and u just made me realize i forget about ma poems once i rite them and i really dont know if dats good or bad... :think:
  11. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    lol..I don't know if thats good or bad...I just know the old poems are good too :)

    So when are you writing a new one??!!
    I feel like I'm spamming now..wouldn't want that in such a nice poem..write a new one whenever you can :dance:
  12. #iR@


    ^ lol... no idea wen i'll rite something! :p and aik baat batao wats wid the :dance: ?? u have started using it a LOT! sab set hai na? :p:

    yea and NOW we r spamming! :p pm me or something... hahahaha
  13. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    bhuut badhiyaan ...
    its positively upwards that the poem takes us ...accha hai
  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Wonderful! I absolutely love it..

    Which way is that? While travelling? If that's what you meant, then you should know that journeys can be very romantic, even if you're alone. I'm sure millions of poets/writers have written while travelling :)
  15. #iR@


    @ madhuresh... thx man! :)

    @ cryptic... yea i almost forgot about this poem... i guess i was reffering to the travelling thing while riting! :p i was rong i guess.... hehe thx for reading! :)

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