Hi all IGTIANS! Now I am sure that the way I am riting this poem no one has ever done it before and even if they have,: they would have never exactly told you guys. So here goes… I am in my car right now, looking out of the window and lahore right now seems to be like heaven. I am riting on this piece of paper and watever I rite will be typed on the computer once I get to log on to IGT. Anyway so I am looking out of the window and the wind is gushing, its drizzling and the sky *looks at the sky and tries to make it sound poetic: * seems to be crying… but these tears r of joy! Ok now this is more like an essay so let me just start off with my poem… hope u guys like it… here goes… FEELINGS EXPRESSING THEMSELVES! The wind gushing With a whistling sound The rain drops Completing my life The sky shrouded in grey Shedding tears of joy Everything appears to be so pleasant Today I feel I am in love But I know this isn’t true It’s the joy deep down That is emerging Like the shinning sun From behind the dark clouds It’s the joy that has been hiding Deep in my heart Fearing to reveal itself Then is time that thoughts conquer my mind; That happiness is always followed by sorrows But I just believe That after every murky night There’s always a new dawn A dawn that brings new hopes New smiles New horizons Yet again the cycle continues Happiness followed by sorrows And sorrows followed by joys All I need to do is Listen to my heart And lead this life And hold tight my dreams Dreams that will never fade away Dreams that no one can snatch from me Dreams that will always remain mine… And mine alone! THANKS A TONNNN FOR READING... hope u guys liked it! and plzzzz don't forget to comment... rote this poem in 15 mins... comments plzz......
I liked it very much....cos i neva wrote like this....seems that u r in LOVE....... with NATURE : cos now-a-days u r writing so much about skies,wind, stars, moon..... goooood goin...reps if permitted
wow...feelings seem to pour out fast when you are in what you are writing..*wonders if that made any sense*....some nice lines you wrote hira..keep it up...i think u should travel more often...
@ garima... thanks... yea maybe i am:think: NAHhhh i don't think soo! : @ hardik... thanks man! @ knight ppl... thanks a lot both of u! @ walk_alone... NAHI YAAR>... abhi kahan! : @ nimitr... THANKS A LOT MAN! :nw: @ rizaaj... thanks for the reps man!
Awesome!!this is really beautiful..there's something about it...I don't know..maybe that I can relate to it..And you've painted a beautiful (and highly poetic) picture..great work:dance:
^ thx a lot man always looking fwd to ur comments and u just made me realize i forget about ma poems once i rite them and i really dont know if dats good or bad... :think:
lol..I don't know if thats good or bad...I just know the old poems are good too So when are you writing a new one??!! I feel like I'm spamming now..wouldn't want that in such a nice poem..write a new one whenever you can :dance:
^ lol... no idea wen i'll rite something! and aik baat batao wats wid the :dance: ?? u have started using it a LOT! sab set hai na? : yea and NOW we r spamming! pm me or something... hahahaha
Wonderful! I absolutely love it.. Which way is that? While travelling? If that's what you meant, then you should know that journeys can be very romantic, even if you're alone. I'm sure millions of poets/writers have written while travelling
@ madhuresh... thx man! @ cryptic... yea i almost forgot about this poem... i guess i was reffering to the travelling thing while riting! i was rong i guess.... hehe thx for reading!
