feedback on take it easy

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by varmas11, Jan 12, 2005.

  1. varmas11

    varmas11 New Member

    take it easy...

    shades of reddish pink... fade away...
    sand's golden brown.. turns a darkened gray...
    listen to the crows of gulls... high above...
    feelin' nothin but.. the peace of a dove
    my face's stoicness... gets lost in the sea...
    crinkles around the eyes... troubles set afree..
    a smile lights on my face... i chuckle a bit...
    feelin' happiness... through all the ****...

    take it easy...
    take it easy...
    take it easy.. now...
    take it easy.... oh...
    take it easy...
    take it easy...

    why you sit there cryin' so?
    tears fall down...
    your pretty face
    we live here...
    we don't live there..
    the past is done..
    so turn the frown
    upside down..
    and smile...
    just for a while...
    gotta be like the river...
    why don't you come hither...
    and go with the flow...
    wherever life will go...


    soft, sweet drops fall on me... late March rain...
    washes away my frown... and all the pain...
    the pitter patter on a tin roof... music sings...
    raindrops echo as they fall... without a sting...
    the sulleness of my face... a smile begins to form...
    inner fire is cracklin'... it feels so warm...
    thoughts in me, begin to spark...
    of the coming sun...
    worst is over, I'm happy...
    the best is yet to come...

    take it easy...
    take it easy...
    take it easy.. now...
    take it easy.... oh...
    take it easy...
    take it easy...

    gotta be like the river...
    why don't you come hither...
    and go with the flow...
    wherever life will go...

    take it easy...
    take it easy...
    take it easy.. now...
    take it easy.... oh...
    take it easy...
    take it easy..

    -saurabh v.

    Copyright ©2004 Saurabh Kumar Varma

    hope you guys like it... it's a real simple song.. just 4 chords... G D Em C.... me and a few friends recorded it in the studio... but we only had 30 mins to do it... so it's not too good. but i'll try to put up a link soon... take care guys... and hit me up with feedback
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