Far but Close

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by tumhare_divya, Nov 28, 2005.

  1. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    a poem about how miles can separate bodies but not souls.....

    commentz pleez....

    "Far But Close"

    Distance can be measured...but the depth of love cannot...
    From the time you came into my life what happiness i've got...
    But a stranger at first...a mystery to me... that lived so far away...
    Yet that loving care and sweet words you shared made me long for you each day...
    There are miles between us...but no emotions unshared...and we will meet someday it is true...
    Yes we live far apart...but you're here in my heart..all my happiest dreams are of YOU...
     
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  2. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    The best part about the poem is its short length. :p: Hey just kidding ... nice one ... but is it the full poem or just a part?
     
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    how sweet... :) this one's for vishwa isnt it? ;)

    :p:
     
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    hey firstly i wanna tell u that the poem u wrote which notty lad..composed later..i was deeply touched by that...it was very nice :) (reps for that)

    and for this..i'll properly read it later when im free
     
  5. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    @ apurbajd...actually it is a shortened version of a full poem Ive written..a tear jerking poem...just seeing if a shortened version still gets the emotion across...:)

    @vini didi...thanks for the compliment...i really felt nottylad brought the poem to life with his awesome voice...
     
  6. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    then post the full version divya .... i am sure it will be a nice reading ......
     
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    hmmmm....gud to c that from u....guess i was PMing u when u were posting ur poem :grin:
     

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