i dream MANY A PLEASANT DREAM...so i just thought of sharing one with you all in the form of a rhyme... comments plz... YOU'VE GOT ME HIGH OFF YOUR LOVE.... I'M SO DRUNK IN YOUR CARE... I WANT TO LAY DOWN BY YOUR SIDE, AND RUN MY HANDS THROUGH YOUR HAIR... AS WE GAZE IN EACHOTHER'S EYES, WE SLOWLY LEAVE THIS WORLD BEHIND... OUR STARES REVEALING THESE DESIRES, THAT HAVE LONG BEEN ON OUR MINDS... THERE'S NOTHING IN MY WAY NOW, I DRAW YOU CLOSE TO ME... PLACING KISSES ON YOUR NECK, WITH SOFT DELICACY... MY ARMS CARESS THOSE SHOULDERS, YOU'RE LAYING BETWEEN MY HIPS... I DRAW YOU EVEN CLOSER... AND TASTE YOUR S**Y LIPS... AND NOW MY HANDS COMMENCE, TO SLOWLY PEELING OFF YOUR CLOTHES... YOU LOOK BETTER OUTSIDE THEM... PLUS, YOU WON'T BE NEEDING THOSE... FOR THIS THAT WE'RE ABOUT TO DO, ALL IT TAKES IS YOU AND ME... TO DO ALL NIGHT TOGETHER, WHAT WAS ONCE JUST FANTASY... DEDICATED TO THE FULFILLER OF MY FANTASIES...
such passionate poems! someone's having a gr8 time, eh? a pleasure to read.. very nice indeed P.S. Dont type it all in caps....
i love you too baby... @ the wizard...yur rite..he shud be here...IN MY SHEETS!!! : not in india... :annoyed:
M wondering who inspired who....did u inspire Vishwa...or did Vishwa inpire u :think: :think: Nice poem though.....
at first i got scared after reading this :shock: then i see something new and creative here. could have been more impressive if u'd have presented the same using poetic words. i am not sure what would that be coz' i am bad at that but someone would know surely but admit very good effort.
Wat da F**k are u talking man ??? dats a F***in erotic poem .. oh muh god .. forgive me for muh language .. but dats awesome .. totally passionate .. n hey .. does any of da guy know where do they get MASKS of other people's faces ???
i agree with itwasnoteasy........seriously u scared me off divya.when u said u wrote a poem as a reply for his poem, i never thought that would be this passionate........and when i asked u to read it to me, u were like not good to read thru phone...............such a passionate poem..... wow, that poem was awesome...........comepletely an amazing reply for his poem...........love being so hot here...........seriously u should meet him soon.........
I don't even feel like commenting back .. but .. wat i actually meant was dat pleasant was a serious understatement .. dats all .. now don't stretch it far ..
I happen to disagree with you when you say that "pleasant" was an understatement. It certainly wouldn't have made me swoon so why judge someone on a scale that is entirely relative?
