Fade to black

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Zafar, Feb 18, 2005.

  1. Zafar

    Zafar New Member

    Fade Out

    Awake and sleeping
    Asleep and dreaming
    Alive
    I have ran out of time

    I thought I was right
    Time told me I was wrong
    My dreams I denied
    This heart sings a sad song

    I am he who never will be king
    I'll watch him live my dreams
    I've lost all that has been worth winning
    What I've won won't give me life

    I thought I was right
    Time told me I was wrong
    My dreams I denied
    This heart sings a sad song

    (Outro)
    Took a wrong turn
    On a one way road
    Hindsight is 20/20
    I look back and see no light
     
  2. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    wow this is gud..i have no words other than awesome
     
  3. ananth222

    ananth222 Beginner

  4. Zafar

    Zafar New Member

    Haha thanks, stupid me spells dying wrong :p
     
  5. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    awesome......
     
  6. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    hehe,the title reminds me of metallica...;) really good poem,keep them up :)
     
  7. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    Great poem zafar. just as good as the one posted by you earlier. I dunno, but the title and the content seem to be slightly outta sync. just some stupid advice from me.
     
  8. Zafar

    Zafar New Member

    Nah buddy, totally valid comment. Just a working title. I'm using it in a film I'm making and it comes in when the film starts fading to black, so I just named it that for now, until I find something.
     
  9. nadish

    nadish Active Member

    Very Nice Zafar! Thats a nice poem/song what ever it is
     
  10. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    this stands out for a good rap lyrics, dude!!!
     

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